After having a strange dream for years, Celestia has joined her guards in nearly every expedition to deal with strange occurrences. The dream had something fall from the sky, and it looked like something was inside the ball of fire, and it was alive. After heading to the Everfree, a blinding flash hits them, and then something crashes in the trees nearby. What is seen inside the fireball looked alive. Celestia and her guards are attacked, and something that is near death because of wounds stands between them. After the battle, Celestia takes this thing back to Canterlot, and her doctors take care of him. What lies in wait for this new creature in this world? Come and find out,
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He seems a bit overpowered, but I'll look past that if he faces some challenges later on that makes him seem weaker.4
Faved for now.
Well, he is strong because he just arrived. Because the universe is different, his body weakens. So don't worry about that, and thank you for the comment.
ah u don't have to weaken him. I say up the anti of the villians, and judging from the other thing that fell, he gonna be facing a nasty demon. seriously writers think to much on the hero, break away and establish a strong enemy, it'll pay off in the long run. good start though, looking forward to this
also don't let any comment influence that you need to do anything. if you don't want to do it stay firm, seen to many stories crash and burn because the writer bent one way. stay strong
XD I was like "Hm a big blade..." later on...."Hm dragon slayer." SKYYRIMMM!!....Nah i know its not but that was hella like a book i've read before. And the beginning seems to play events before they happen so i wonder how that will play out.
I wonder what will happens.
I can't wait for the next chapter seeing that he was like 'War' for a second killing things so awesomely.
interesting, i will keep an eye on this, but please innovate and keep the cliche's to a minimum.
The timberwolves, manticores and dragon got COMPLETELY screwed over! That was epic, more please.
MORE, MORE, MORE PLEASE!!!
Thanks guys for the support, don't worry about losing interest, I have a few tricks up my sleeves on this. I wont spoil anything, not really my style. But keep an eye on this guy, after all, nothing is what is seems. And with that, I sign off. Again, thanks for the awesome comments, I wont disappoint.
A Dragon can understand him? Obviously Dovahkin :P
Interesting story, I'll follow progress, I'm interested how will ponies react to him?
please continue !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
needs work but not bad
Seems very good but i noticed one thing: As the seven guards galloped forward, he creature ahead of them raised his hand, as if telling them to stop, and that is what they did.
I think you meant The creature ahead.
Fus ro dah im kidding great story i beat it will be 20% cooler
Who the hell is this guy!
Grammatical mistakes here and there, but other than that, good job.
Bit of trouble with word-choice and flow, some rough dialogue, but these are things that come with time. Good luck with the story!
A very good fic I approve
Update?
Alright guys, Chapter two is in progress, I have just been under some stress and having writers block.
But, i am about a third of the way done. So please, try to stay patient, I am working as often as i can, really, i'm trying. i will try to have the next chapter up by the middle of this month. Just hold on a bit longer. and thank you for the awesome feedback. you guys are really helping me out.
About time you are back!
Nice chapter btw.
but lack colure it is a good black and white painting but it lacks the flare to draw me deep with in
Yes it was awesome !
More please!
Why did Celestia yell out about his age
, he gave no indication about his age prior to Celestia's outburst.
Ahh, let me clarify why she burst, Hydregarn looks as if he is in his early twenties, also, she didn't expect "normal" people to live seven centuries. So you would think it would catch her off guard. And besides, Celestia never has any surprise in the series, so i thought i would give her a few reasons to give a little shake. and sorry guys for the delay, had a case of writers block, my brothers bugging me, and a lack of inspiration. i will work on chapter 3 this weekend, and try to get it up sooner than this one
... Go on
Goddammit, I had his age reference there but somehow it was erased, thank you for pointing that out AetherToast, I have fixed that mistake. If any of you find mistakes, please, point them out and I will fix them.
Great chapter I'll fav this and see where this is going
Oh my dayum!
Glad you are still alive! Enjoyed the chapter though!
Soo will you be adding the mature and sex tag for the next chapter?
Wow I love this ;w; I like the relationship between Celestia and Hydregarn ^^
It does look like there will be something romantical going on soon.
Celestia already called him adorable plus she remembers alot of good times with him.
Now the shower and making lewd jokes on top of the hearth and hooves day.
Make it happen!
I like the current tittle and dude
So much epicosity...I think I'm turning pony
...
*poof*
Huh... At least I turned into an epic pony.
Sorry boys, no sexy times.
Dat last line
Trollestia
Oh, come on!!!
What did the letter say?!
3042652 The world may never know.
3042652 I want to know, too!!!
Add the romance tag! You know you want to.
This is pretty good. Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading your story. I assume you know who I am, my friend.i'll go catch up really quick and stay tuned in the future.
Wow. I'm getting into your story much more than I expected. I love how mischievous you made Celestia. I'm sitting here each chapter wondering what shes gonna do next, and from the sound of it she's really bad on hearts and hooves day.
Oh god. My shipping meter broke. This hasn't happened since I discovered Vinyl x Octavia. Great chapter. I'm caught up so update when you're ready!!
Arrow to the knee!!!
I.. must... resist... to...
FUS RO DAH!!!
Sorry. I could'nt resist...
(Stares at computer screen, then flips table.)