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A unstable newly evolved Chandelure takes residence in a abandoned house in Manehatten. His name is Soul Light, with his mental acquaintance 'The Basilisk' who is known as Fang. The house however isn't as abandoned as he had thought. Instead a friendly ghost has decided to be friends with the soul burning chandelier. Something strange ensures.

Sequel to the Lampents Lament in Equestria book which can be found here

Chapters (10)
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2709148 Soul the Chandelure or Soul as in the thing he eats? :pinkiecrazy:

I just found this story (prequel) like, 2 hours ago? Really great story, can't wait for more and I'm glad i found it at just the right time too. :pinkiehappy:

Oh yeah , question, is "Mort" a reference to the Mort, the guider of souls, that is taking a break currently?

2710155 How'd you guess? :pinkiecrazy: Big fan of mort myself. Consider him as good as canon :3 Sweet old mort, he just needs a hug :3

You have no idea how often I think about the show Soul Eater while reading this.


Fairly. That's how often.

2711529 :heart: to you too! :pinkiesad2:

2715101 Hmm, somehow I completely forgot about that show until now. Good thing Soul's full name is Soul Light rather than Eater :pinkiecrazy:

I am glad to see that Soul the Chandelure has still not given up on his will to survive without becoming a monster. But I worry. Does what Soul mean by not a child mean he did take the souls of other ponies?

her long sender light blue body complete with a darker blue mane and tail

Pretty sure you mean slender

"Markless" huh? Such a sad fate to live a life, and not find your destiny, only to be forced to find it in the afterlife. Well forced as in no leaving until you do. Still an interesting concept if I do say so myself. Did you draw inspiration for this or did you make it up yourself?

Um, in the last paragraph you put a (3) yet I only see two notes. What gives?

2779030 Hmm the third authors note vanished... 'Scuse me for a second I'll fix it.

2778870 I decided to make this after a combination of influences as an different idea. After all there is a variety of ghosts and mythology covering the restless dead for humans, the same should be said for MLP. I tried to elaborate upon that while introducing some of the 'types' of ghosts I would imagine there being in My little pony, as well as the reason they are there. Categorizing them into different packs or types of ghosts from friendly spiritual guides to those aggressive demon like ghosts from horror stories. Though, I loathe to linger on the subject of what would happen if somepony with a split personality died. (Oh Celestia forbid, Pinkiemania being on the loose! :fluttershbad: ) Anyway, glad you like the concept. :twilightsmile:

Oh God... Pinkie Pie is part of an elite Black Ops squad... God have mercy on everyponys souls...:pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2:

2779755 I think derpy is in it too.

So Luna fancies some 'Death Lights', huh? :rainbowwild: Lovin' all the references by the by, and ones I can actually get for once without having to toss it into google search. I also liked the perspective changes that you're doing because, now that I think about it, it would get kinda boring just talking about Chandelure without the setting changing very much at all. Getting others' perspective on the situation does tie it all together in a nice little bow.

Oh dear God... Poor Fluttershy. :fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::fluttershysad::derpytongue2:

2955937 Heaven's Mirror, or Death lights have been my favorite flower of all time in videogame history, glad you know of them and their other name of 'Death light' as well. :pinkiesmile:

2958333 Poor fluttershy indeed, though I bet everyone would be put in a hospital from the amount of 'Hnngg' her adorable terrified squeaks of terror could cause. :pinkiesad2:

And I have now caught up on this story, only....how many updates left cosmos?
24
Yeah if you'll excuse me I'll just be going home now.
~Sylpheed and Eli

Well....I got a LONG night ahead, don't I? This is like, the fifth story that I could've SWORN I favorited....But I didn't get any notifications, so I didn't think to go look at them again. I'm just glad I found this again before it got too far in.

2779220 in short then they would basicly stay just one pony i guess. oh and by the way you get ten mustaches for the story so far. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

and now for the ultimate showdown randomly appearing. [youtube=GgLiA2Jch5Y]

Hurry up and make a new chapter!

3299453 Wonder what would happen if your cutie-mark was for something that can't be done in death, like construction work or helping the government, or perhaps economic type cutiemarks. :pinkiecrazy:

3345791 Working on it, as well as a lot of other things though, will update as soon as possible.

3299464 Not really a showdown persay. :twilightsmile:

3158359 Dang right.

(Joke) Alt. Title: BOO! Our Haunted House!

Also...

3461810 Take this. It's the sort of music I listened to when writing the first book, A Lampent's Lament in Equestria.

3461874
Me neither, but that right there is the definition of scary music. So to calm your nerves, here's something amazing.

Mmhm. That was another good chapter.

Aw, yeah! this story ain't got no hate!

3585125 I am happy. No hate means no hunting people down and killing them in their sleep.

3586555 There, there. There is no need to hunt anypony down. Everypony is titled to their own opinion and should be respected none the less. :twilightsmile: Though I do admit I am kind of surprised by the lack of negative votes by now. Probably just jinxed it didn't I? Oh well, what comes and go is up to the world ain't it? Hope you all have a Happy Hearths Warming this year! :heart:

Great story. Just as good as the first one.

HAHAHA Fucking honey badgers! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

3586692 Wow, I just noticed that!
Guess I better go ahead and down vote then :rainbowwild:

JKLOLOL :pinkiehappy:

Celestia seems always bee a bit like a fool, she always is like "danger danger danger, strong = danger", well nothing against the story, just not the first time^^

I somehow really like the story, i just don´t know really why yet.

I don´t know yet how to feel about the fact that Twilight get Pokemon Power, but as long as Soul have still a chance against such a Power i don´t complain.
They don´t have to fight, but i thought Soul would be a strong guy for a while.

I have to admit, that i am still interessted and can´t really wait till tomorrow to read more.:heart:

I am not sure that i understand this chapter that much (because i speak German maybe), but i like the whole story idea, the Ghostmare looks a bit like the annoying, innocent and friendly ghost. She might be able to help him with his other problems and help him control them if he cares enough for her, but i would like it if she not get to be the contolling type of their relationship, i woul like them to be equivalent :heart::heart::heart:

Now you are just being cheap with the quote...

"Super ninja guard Twilight safety troopers go!"

Super Robot Monkey Team Hyper Force Go? I found myself thinking it, then I realized there were the same amount of words in it.

Middle of the night? Not a problem, SOLAR BEAM.

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