Wile trying out a new telaportation spell, Twilight and friends find themselves in Kanto. There they meet a young man named Zander believed to be the worlds most powerful Pokemon trainer. However, with out any new challenges he has grown bored of his title. Will he be able to help the main 6 adjust to this new world and get them home? Only time and space will tell.
The fifth generation will not be in this story
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Never say this. People hate this. It's like getting a job at a restaurant, and then saying "Oh, I've actually never cooked a day in my life. Be nice."
You just can't do that. It's no excuse.
This looks promising will be watching with great intrest
Agreed with what CluelessBrony said. You'll never get better unless people tear apart your mistakes in your work.
Oh, trust me, it hurts. It hurts a lot, especially when you thought that there wasn't much wrong with it. But there is, undoubtedly.
The pain of editing and getting torn apart and your stuff called bad is unfortunately needed if you want to become better at writing.
I used to be much, much worse. I'm probably still shit, but I was better than I was before, probably.
This didn't look like too bad of a start, but really, I skimmed through it.
Anyway, don't ever say that. I'll be watching this.
Looks cool. Hurry and update so I can read on :3
Awesome chapter!! :3 Too bad everypony's gonna see them butt naked when he brings them back
Interesting indeed
HA I'M CHAMPION OF ALL THE REGIONS. anyway cool story bro. Now you just need him to go to Unova and become new champ.
I think you should introduce Proffessor Juniper and the Unova region starter types in the next chapter so we don't leave them out of the loop.
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I need to make things clearer, the fifth generation will not be in this story. I have nothing against the fifth generation it's just that I know where the story is going to go and it's not going to Unova anytime soon, if at all. Plus the Black and White storyline makes it harder to combine with the current story. I will not completely ignore the fifth generation, and if I find a way to include it or reference it, I will. I'm sorry if I disappoint you.
THE PLOT THICKENS!!!!!
i like this story
at what rate should we expect chapter updates?
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I will try to get chapters out at least once every 2 to 3 weeks, a month at the most. Don't hold me to that, I'm a bit of a procrastinator.
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That scene was inspired by an anime called Chobits.
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Yes eight, I figured using the same four moves would be boring. I figured this is how Pokemon would work if they were real.
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I've done nothing productive since the last chapter, but now I'm going to start the next one. If I'm lucky I'll get it out by Saturday or next Thursday.
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Don't say anything. Just write as though it isn't your first. Nobody cares if it's your first story- it's either good, or it's bad.
Haha!
I love how Pinkamena showed through towards the end!!
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You know, I don't actually know where 'Pinkamena' came from, I assume cupcakes, which is a story I haven't read or will ever read, but everyone likes to see their favorite characters go a little crazy from time to time.
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Pinkamena is an actual character from the show. Party of One, season 1.
Also, you need a proofreader/editor. Nice story, but it has scattered errors throughout the entirety of the story, and you need stronger sentence structuring, try more commas and semicolons instead of constantly making a new sentence every clause change.
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I appreciate your feedback, however, could you be more specific about the errors?
Also If anyone wants to be a proof reader, send me a PM.
2512076 There's minor/major grammatical errors I found throughout the story, if you want though I can go back and edit them out when I have spare time.
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Could you send me some examples, at least a few from a couple of chapters? I won't know where I need improvement unless I know what's wrong. As for letting you edit, I don't know how to do that.
2509258 not to spoil the story or nothing but if this does have something to do with time/space, than eventually they're gonna figure out they dialgas' and palkias' help somehow, right??? ;).
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Sorry, no spoilers!
2529046 well, i think a good pokemon for rarity would be glameow, since sewaddle would be out of the question since he is from unova. :'(.
YAAAAAAY LOTS OF POKEMON!!!!!!!! I WANNA POKEMON..... GIMME A RALTS ANYDAY!!!!!
At Last!
You know I had an idea that you could use if you want to. It basically having Unova league champ seek out zander beat him say he did a good job of battling him and ask him to come to unova to challenge him again when he is ready.
Yeah, later a foray into the Unova region would be awesome.
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I have an idea for a possible sequel that takes place in Unova, but right now I want to focus on this story. Not to mention the fact that I have other story ideas I want to try. But, I do like your idea, and I may or may not use it. Thank you for the input.
how about the next chapter rarity gets a poke-egg of a pichu
next chapter rarity catches a caterpie or wurmple
obvious typo is obvious, and i'm expecting either Flutters to catch a pokemon, Rarity to freak out over bugs/catch one by accident or for there to be some sort of awkward web related misunderstanding xD
nice chapter
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Yes, thank you, fixed. But that's what happens when your best working time is between 11PM and 2AM
I am absolutely LOVING this!!!
Why is this story not getting more love?!?! It's great to say the least!
It seems a bit rushed. I think more transitional sequences would work for this, and maybe more adjective descriptions of things.
Otherwise, nice story.
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Feel free to tell your friends who like Pokemon and ponies.
New chapter at last!!!
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I'm glad to see you so enthusiastic. If all goes well the next chapter will be out tomorrow... maybe... no promises.
Lol. I can't believe he still has Joeys number
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Well, you can't erase numbers in HG, SS know mater how much you want to.
I hate the way you portray Rainbow. Just seems OOC, she would've at least looked for her friends instead of brooding in a tree. She's the element of loyalty, super brash, too. She wouldn't sit around and do nothing.
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I feel justified in how I wrote Rainbow, because she was upset, and people who are angry or upset don't act in the way they normally would.
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It seems too far OOC for just a little argument. If it was something larger I could see it. Maybe insulting her or something.
A cool name for these two chapters could be 'Of mazes and monsters'
that's future Zander's problem. HA!
oooh spike is gonna eat so much ice cream thinking twilight just went somewhere for the night
until he realizes twilight and her friends are missing...
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Thank you, I'd appreciate that.
Not too bad so far! (Needs moar Ponyta tho
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I will fav and continue to read!
When can we expect the next chapter?
Nice work by the way
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I might get the next chapter out sometime next week, hopefully
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Honestly, I don't know, I've been having trouble focusing. First, the church across the street was having a carnival, and now there's road construction.
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Thanks for letting me know, good luck writing with all that insanity going on.