Warning!: All characters are human!
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Partial tags: [Crossover] Reason: This takes elements from the game: Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance
[Dark] Reason: It has some moments were "reality" kicks in, so to speak
Waking up on a clearing is a surprising thing, considering the fact I should be dead. I've been overwhelmed with diseases and died a slow death, leaving my family and friend behind. Now I must start off again in the land of Equestria. However i believe there must be another reason why I came here. But that's a bit cliche don't you think? Sometimes fate can be a lovely lady...Or a Sadistic Bastard.
Maybe both?
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The beginning is based on a true life event I had back in November 2013, although i did not die from these diseases, I was almost killed by the septic shock, the entire incident left me in a sour shape for about a month... I'm fine now and i decided to write a story on what would happen if i were to die from the diseases and was sent to Equestria. Somewhat of a self-insert, only has the major events like the changeling invasion, the marriage, and the coronation, etc. Any other episodes will be replaced with this storyline. First real fan-fiction, second attempt. Constructive criticism is NEEDED!
Do go on this is interesting.
Wow really powerful.
I was on the edge of my seat intrigued at your battle scene with the timber-wolves. Your Chris Taylor is awesome and I can't wait I can't wait to see what adventures you have.
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I'm working on the next chapter for when christopher wakes in the hospital.
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Thanks for your encouragement, there is plenty more plans i have in store for the protagonist, some may even be plot twists
i dunno about this... but i'm intrested in how you will handle the next chapter, so i'll favourite this for now and decide wether or not to upvote or not in the next chapter.
powerful prologue, good way to hype a story
Plz update soon
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Soon soon, almost done with the chapter, expect an update by tomorrow or Saturday.
Sorry, school and what not. Getting bombarded with End of course exams.
Finally updated anyway good chapter
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i suggest using 'Location' instead.
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Done, thanks for your insight
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I'll consider it
This story is awsome!!!! I DEMAND TO SEE MORE!!!!
Can't wait for my summer vacation to start in three weeks.
...Isn't this guy thirteen years old?
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He died in the prologue on his fourteenth birthday
I just continued his aging process from there
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So he went to Iraq... Joined the armed forces... After he died?
I have no idea what's going on.
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At his age of 9 his little sister died from Iraqi terrorists.
In a quest for revenge he joined the armed forces for three years
Which is when he turned 12
He lived a disturbed life until 14 where he died from septic shock
He continues to grow from the age of 14 in equestria
Quote from prologue: I’m supposed to turn fourteen today, and instead I’m on my death bed
Hope this clears things up in layman's terms
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So his parents brought an eight year old into a warzone, then the brass let him in the armed forces?
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Forgot to add this into the author notes
This story is realisictly illogical
Meaning trying to make sense while bending the rules of the world.
Therefore the rules of the military barely applies' while still keeping somewhat sense
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Then instead of adding it in the author's notes, it might be better if you wrote it in the story itself.
Of course ignoring some rules while following others seems kind of cheap... Whatever. Let's see how this turns out.
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It may be somewhat cheap, however it's needed to make sense, somewhat,
i just added an author's note in the story, representing the situation, hopefully this will prevent any future problems regarding Chris's military lifestyle
Look in chapter 4: the paragraph before the horizontal line break before the flashback
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Alright then.
Oh I know what you did...
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Done, thanks for your insight.
This story is bucking awesome dude
YAY UPDATE!!
Metal gear revengence it was really easy to spot.
that was f funny.
I LOVE IT
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Yea, i kinda got it the first time Dragon, though i will have to ask you to at least delete half of these to prevent spam.
Thanks for the compliment though
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...I don't even know how to respond to this...
who tipped you off? :3
i'll pay you double to stay quiet.
nah just kiddin' but my serious side kicked out and he just wanted to say no, that's not him.
P.S, you were never supposed to understand this comment...
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It's technically Metal gear Rising: Revengeance
but yes, this story is loosely based off of it, in the future when my writer's block wears off i can come up with more original items.
2997821 I can't stop laughing because of that picture, it's just too perfect
Why no beard? Someone is scared to be MANLY!
Hey nice story so far, but if you're going to make him have a tragic past atleast make him slightly Gary Stu. Also I hope I smell some shipping hehehehe.
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Thanks for the compliment,
I plan on having some kind of shipping but i'm still trying to think through it. Conflicting ideas and what not.
i'm not gonna say who though.
Metal gear revengence nice choice for inspiration
Wow I don't think I read a story that started out like this.
I'll think shall continue to the next chapter.
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What's even scary is how i was VERY close, to getting killed by septic shock.
From what i felt, i hacked once feeling sick and about to throw up, then according to the monitor's my heart rate and blood pressure shot up, and it felt like i got stabbed in the back of my head, for a good thirty seconds, i was writhing in pain, until it stopped as soon as it came, i don't know what happened but what i do know is i felt really tired, and i slept.
i didn't know i was knocking on the door of death. I was VERY lucky.
I then woke up to the face of the doctor of the ICU, i explained to him what happened, and that i felt fine, (or at least the resemblance of *fine* when you have three diseases in you)
It is NOT a pleasant experience, i am glad to have survived.
Is that a KM-2000?
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Most likely, the knife technically belongs to my step-father Dale comstock, did a quick search on the internet and came up with dozens of knives looking the same as the one in the picture...
After the whole ordeal of my big sister in the hospital passes, i'll ask Dale for more information on the origins of his knife