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Hekkar


Brony, Gamer, Roleplayer. I am also a Jackal who is skilled in Alchemy, Black Magic, Voodoo Powers, and Necromancy :3

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The land of ponies is as everyone knows is a land of magic, happiness and kindness. It's all of the Ponyville ponies and Equestria, but what about those in Everfree? What if there is another Pony there, but using powers that nopony dare uses? Everyone knows of Manticores, a rhyming Zebra, Cockatrice, Hydras, and other such creatures, but what if there is something more then that? What if deeper in the Everfree is a stallion that no one dares cross or even try to harm unless they want to get cursed, hexed or even had a spell placed on them that won't come off until a lesson is learned.

One such pony lives in the woods as very few speak to him and vice versa. Though what happens when the said stallion comes to town every now and then for supplies? A few herbs, some food and of course what if they come to him for special needs? A hex on a bully or a potion for help in courage? Only if they can pay the price.

To the stallion, it's just another day for a voodoo Pony. Though what if one day, some ponies need to rely on such forbidden magic to save the day now and again? Well then, he maybe in business for something more then potions and voodoo spells. Or perhaps the Forest holds secrets, like deals that were made within their confines or some of the ponies are not what they seem?

Rated T for effects from curses and bad language mostly. Also all the ponies do have tech just so you know. Also there are going to be more characters encountered then just the five character's tagged, just so everyone knows. Also Tags maybe updated as time goes on, just be patient with me.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 76 )

5071990 It maybe interesting, or it maybe a flop. Never know till you try right?

seems good but lets see where this goes
good opening though

I like it so far. Any ideas of what you'd like to do with it?

5074413 Well I do plan of doing stuff like maybe the Mane 6 need a bit of assistance from potion or perhaps someone comes to get a bit of revenge, like the CMC getting a hex on DT and SS or Fluttershy getting payback on Gilda. Just random ideas at this point, like a large list and just striking down whatever seems not so important or as good of a idea.

I do have one idea of Blueblood coming to town and bumping into Spectre and after a few insults learns why you don't insult a voodoo stallion.

I just like to say thanks for the comments and questions people along with reviews so far. Again if like to offer advice or ideas then don't be afraid to send a message or post in comments :)

Quick update, hit a bit of writers block. Trying to find a 'pony' form of the word Jamaican, but so far no luck

(Examples of 'pony' form are like: Las Vegas = Las Pegasus, Manhattan = Manehattan, etc. )

I like this chapter, especially seeing our hero's failed attempts at distracting Pinkie Pie.:rainbowlaugh:

Your story seems to be shaping up quite well. I do have a few recommendations though, your paragraphs are quite long which is rather intimidating for a reader. I recommend you split up your paragraphs a bit more in increase the readability in your story. Also consider separating the dialogue outside of the paragraphs, this is just a personal preference however.
On another note I'm curious as to what level of anthro this story is, I may have missed it, is it like Equestria Girls or something different?

5078593 Well it is a work in progress so expect changes now and again with edits at times. As for level of anthro I would say that from what some can tell, they do have the parts exposed like tails, horns and wings... well not the wing part since no Pegasi have been shown yet. I really can't define a level of anthro accurately as best way is.... they do have muzzles, they do have special part to identify themselves as different species of equine (Earth, Alicorn, Unicorn, Pegasi, etc.), they do have cutie marks of course and tails, I think a artist I found has pics to best describe them. His name is Jrvanesbroek

5078590 Hey! He never had to deal with such a weird mare before. He's mind is going to be lost and not to mention he will learn one lesson the hard way: Do Not Question Pinkie Pie. :rainbowlaugh:

Update: I am having a conflict at the moment. One part of me wishes to do individual chapters of him meeting the Mane 6, but another side wants to meet them all in one chapter just to get it out of the way.

Love the conundrum that Specter is going to face the following day.

5086998 Oh you mean getting a kick to the head for leaving or the fact that Pinkie will some how find him and find him wherever he goes until he explains himself? Yeah that is a problem.

Really liking it, keep on doing what you're doing

5087171 I can only promise to try... though do have a few ideas for later chapters. Problem is how to incorporate them.

:rainbowlaugh: BWAHAHAHAHA! serves blueblood right. Hope Celestia doesn't go too hard on him though.

Quite a first meeting that he got with Celestia...though seeing an exhibition of his voodoo powers was worth it. I hope the next chapter comes soon, as I want to see how Specter will interact with Celestia.

5092730 Honestly.... I have officially hit a wall now. I have seen many different forms of Celestia and in my mind she is fair and just. What is fair is her nephew getting knocked down a few knots, but punishment should match

5092760 I am not sure how to make it act.... so far my mind is yelling at me 'His Punishment Must Involve Friendship!' somehow.

5092918 True, we can certainly trust Celestia to give just and fair judgement.

5092947 Something like maybe learn friendship or some thing. Not sure officially on that, cause he did teach Blueblood a lesson.

Love the interaction between those two. I shipped them hard.:heart:

5097427 that was really good, can, I have more of that.
zecore and Specter please :pinkiehappy:

5098092 Of course, but I will tell you... expect two more females to possibly be with Spectre.... all thanks to one idea and it will be..... epic!

The interaction that Specter had with Mane 6 was good. I especially liked the fact that he was understanding about Fluttershy's shyness and that he shares a passion for books like Twilight.

5100884 Well mainly dark magic books as previously explained when he spoke with Celestia

Interesting choice for hook ups for the girls. Nice to see that the girls trust him enough to show their significant others to Specter.

5107418 Well no reason not to since only one would be secretive and that's RD's

Loved Fluttershy interaction with Big Mac...and Twilight's invasive questions regarding his dating life. Is the Princess of Friendship interested on Specter?

5109964 Possibly, but a girl doesn't ask a guy "size" unless she wants him...or she's acting as a messenger for another girl who's interested. Guess, we'll find out in future chapters.

5109996 Or that I was putting that there because I couldn't think of another question.... yeah that's it maybe.

I noticed he changed his story about his scars, dark secret maybe? If so will we find out the true story? If not, why change the reason behind the scars?

5110437 I changed the story about them? Oh crap I did.... authoritive mistake people, I will change it when I can

5110458 oh, i thought you were going to have some story like they were because he hexed someone early in his life and just didn't want to tell anyone about it.

just read up to this point and i love it

5124255 Ty, though I seem to of hit a wall of what to post as a hint for Velvet. I can't really explain via comment since that give spoilers :derpytongue2:

5125620 Hurray! And here is your prize

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5125861 so when is the next chapter going to be out:trixieshiftright:

5127910 As soon as I can think of what to do... so far I have a plan, but not sure of how to incorporate it all, but will have a hard time and the answer be so simple, he could not believe he didn't think of it.

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