• Published 16th Feb 2013
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Little Brother, Our Foal Forever - Dashiel



With the alicorn of magic, and the alicorn of love being the two immortal loves of the mortal Shining Armour, how do they keep a hold of the one they adore?

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Comments ( 22 )

Yay an update. Seems like an interesting chapter onward to adventures!

I hope he'll be successful

Hmm. So it looks like the Alicorns have a bit of an infantilism fetish...

Still i find it funny that Star Swirl the Bearded got to his state by screwing up a magic spell.

I just want there to be a light at the end of the tunnel that doesn't turn out to be a neon sign saying 'Welcome to Stockholm'. Come on boys, you can do it! Starswirl at least!

I think they're gonna be in soooooo much trouble when they end up in another bathroom with all four Princesses X3

Thi will be awesome. :pinkiehappy:

An escape huh? Doubt it's going to work out. :eeyup:

So Shinning was turned by Twilight and Cadance.
Star-swirl the bearded did it to himself.
So Blue Blood was turned by Luna? Can you clarify that. I wasn't sure

On another note glad that you continued on.
I wounder what trouble these three can get into.

Good luck and best wishes.

AN UPDATE!!! AT LONG LAST!!!

This chapter amuses me so!

You know, this is technically a lighter version of Pattycakes.:twilightsheepish: But I do like this version better.:pinkiehappy:

So cute what took you so long to make another chapter

2925021 blueblood was probably turned by luna until she was basined which then celestia did it to keep him alive till her return , and it seems now she just does it at her leazure for petty reasons?.....

2931921 uh no , pattycakes was about mental regression , this is physical....

so great this is gonna turn into a epic continuing story then? well at least we'll finally get some updates maybe?.....

So the first chapter was fetishy, and now it is an episode of Rugrats. An improvement I'd say.

...This story is fucked up.:pinkiesick:

That said, I'm wondering where this will lead.

You know, although this was pretty screwed up and the characters were OOC at first :ajbemused: , this is pretty good so far. :pinkiecrazy: Definite favorite and upvote.:heart: I hope you update super-soon! :pinkiehappy:

Please tell me that Shining won't stay a foal forever, that he'll overcome this and be turned back to normal and that Twilight and Cadence will see the error of their ways. It seems like Cady and Twilight are manipulating him with love magic, it just seems wrong to me. Or at least have him call them out about doing to him against his will, please?:fluttercry:

Other than that, not a bad story.

Comment posted by Solar Blaze deleted Sep 5th, 2014

I WANT MORE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!

What the fuck, man?

I use this is on indefinite hiatus aka dead

Makes me sad this is dead. love it

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