Quite an intresting concept. I look forward to more.

I haven't even read it yet, but this is gonna be awesome! DUCKFACE

Well.....It's interesting......I think..........It's a new spin on the topic. Great job with the big fanchy werds!

I notice this is marked mature, but neither sex nor gore is specified, forcing me to ask, is this clop?

This is creepy

Awwwww baby shining armor sooo cute

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No, there's no clop in this. You'll see why if you read it.

P.s. maybe you can read my story my day in ponyville

Interesting... it's one way of addressing the immortality problem.

Not liking how this is going.

2132011 So there's not gonna be any foalcon, then? Then why is it marked mature?

I seem to have a knack for these types of stories so please keep on writing and continuing this. I am very interested in learning what is going to happen next.

I admit I laughed.

There's a moment where you didn't capitalize Cadence's name but everything's all right.

2132047, the mods see this as "fetish" material and depending on which mod you get, they'll either let it through with either an Everyone, Teen or Mature. Usually, they'll make you tag it as mature.

While not amazing in the style department, your mechanics were solid and it wasn't duller than a pencil that had been worn down to the eraser nub. Good show, looking forward to more.

In regards to people fussing about the mature tag, sex was heavily implied and the use of the diaper would probably squick the pre-reader. A word of advice would be to keep the more... detailed parts for a second chapter, after your story is approved. As long as you don't do anything too extreme after that, chances are the story won't be bumped up.

That said, as long as there isn't an clop, the application of a Mature tag is unfair. A Teen, yes, but not Mature.

I so call a breastfeeding scene.

Awwwe poor little Shinning Armor not up to playing with teddy

OH GOD. I'm having flashbacks to Pattycakes.

This. This shit right here gives me nightmares. I don't mind foalcon. I don't mind rape. I don't mind gore and torture and death. But this shit makes my skin crawl.

Oh, wait, I just realised who the author is. You're the one who wrote the story about Big Mac getting castrated and the one about 63'd Twilight getting her junk bitten off by Chrysalis' vagina dentata. I thought those were both pretty funny. Congratulations on finally outputting something that disgusts even me.

oh the cold heartless cruelty of it all I like it

*incoming call from Shining Armor*
Sup Shine. Calling in that favor I owe you for letting me go the other day?
*in high-pitched voice* uh-huh.
... Who is this?
Jeff, it's me, Shining Armor. My sister cast some spell on me or something last night, and now I'm an infant. You're the only pony I know that can restrain an alicorn with the threat of lethal force, so I need you to come down here and get them to CHANGE ME BACK!!!
*sighs* I'm on my way...
10 minutes later
*stretches* thanks Jeff. I had no idea you could reflect a spell back at somepony with your knife. I'm guessing that's how you took out my best unicorn guards last time.
Yeah. So, is that everything?
*turns to baby Cadence and Twilight* Wanna help me pick out some humiliating outfits for them before you go?
Oh HELL yes
*glances at Cadence*
*glances at Twilight*
MAAAAAAAAAAAAMAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
MAAAAAAAAAAAAMAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

That needs Dark tag.

Seriously. Being put through infancy again and again and again?... Arguably, a fate worse then death, when one`s mind stays adult.

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Agreed. Mid to late Teen years without all that pesky "School" Hell to deal with, fine. Reliving a body that can't handle potty training, not so much.

2132851 With who?

I am intrigued by this concept. But I feel for shining armor. I hope he gets his revenge in the end.

Dang you Twilight. Poor Shinning. I hope he gets back at them in some way eventualy

Well that took age play to a different level.

but this story is way to good, way to full of potental, to pass up. Faved.

Hmm... Maybe Shining needs to be friends with Discord for some real revenge.

You, are an evil, evil, reasonably twisted soul.

Good on ya!

Personally, I find this hilarious. Will follow this to the end cheerfully.

And, for those of you who regard being regressed to being a baby with an adult's mind by two immortals devoted to keeping you happy and healthy as a nightmare/fate worse than death? ...What plane of existence do you hale from? It must be very strange...

yu are twisted

2140709 The plane of existence where personal independence and free will matter? I dunno.

Interesting I'm going to follow you on this.

MOAR

He wasn't sure how things could get worse. One thing was sure, he was going to find out.

Just wait Shining Armour until your first bath...

Alicorn Twi and Cadence are really, really psychotic...

2156115 I call upon two expressions: The Path to Hell is paved with Good Intentions, and Absolute Power Corrupts Absolutely. The two younger princesses don't have quite as much of a grasp on their role as goddesses and believe that they can fix absolutely any problem that comes their way.

Here lies the pride of Shining Armour

....HA.

It was very funny. The beginning and the End of the story. And i bet this is twilight is like in the story -->

0h I would be pissed... VERY FUCKING PISSED!!! I would make cadances life a living hell. starting with the fact oh hey we can never have sex again.. EVER. also your married to a foal... Or if he was me he would be untill the divorce went through.

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This may be a bit late. But it seems that he has already pissed.

Cadance is a seriously kinky mare ...
She wants the stallion (she just had sex with) turned colt to call her Mommy ...
how long has she had these ... needs?

this is fucked up. down voteing this shit.
i mean really why?
this is out of character for cadance and twilight.

My face after reading this chapter.onlyhdwallpapers.com/thumbnail/heavy_team_fortress_grimheavy_tf2_desktop_1680x1050_hd-wallpaper-50527.jpg

Uhhhhhhh ummmmmmnn Ok I guess um this is a bit weird

I think this is an interesting line of thought although I cannot help but think of the evil side of this.
I mean with the power to transform him into a foal plus the power to mess with his memories (Twilight) they could essentially recycle him everytime he grows too old.

They could even switch up how he is raised, and who gets to play mommy for the next 50 to 100 years (depending).
Then maybe a few hundred years later or maybe even a thousand (FIM loves that number after all) he discovers pictures or some other evidence that clues him in to something being wrong...

I just see a lot of possibilities for this kind of story!

3450228 shhhh don't give the writer ideas o3o

This is interesting. I'm in.

Also, isn't the Crystal Empire missing half a monarchy and a royal guard captain now?

You have my interest piqued.