Well, this just got much creepier.

If I was Shining Armor, I'd wait until Celestia and Luna came back, then tell them everything, let them change me back, and as soon as possible GET AWAY FROM CADENCE. And divorce her in a court where you don't have to be present, because she is a PSYCHO.

I'm liking what you've been doing so far, please keep it up and continue writing.

You are doing a really good job.

Cadence and Twilight need to go to a mental therapist

Heheh, loving this story tons! Hope they eventually sit down and explain the whole situation to him. Right now though it's more fun to watch Shining squirm X3

So, Cadence is basically giving him good feelings when she wants him to be alright with something and taking it away when he fights what she wants? Welp, can't see what's wrong with that, not like she's training him through artificially inducing good feelings when he's obedient.

This story divides me. On one hand, its a story of a fetish I'm all behind and its well written. On the other, Cadence and Twilight are being evil. I want to watch Shining being inevitably left as a foal and how it gets there yet I also want him to get out of the situation Oh, its hard to decide. So I'll keep reading until I decide and enjoy the ride.

Keep up the good work.

I think they should of regressed his mind as well.

Well Twilight and Cadnece's intentions are good but they really shouldn't have tried to force this onto Shining Armor. You know they should've asked him if he wanted to be young again as opposed to regressing him out of the blue.

Overall I think they need to consider Shining Armor's feelings the next time they decide to regress him.

Still this is pretty good. Not really sure Cadence should've spanked Shining Armor just because he tried to ask for help.

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Doubt that would work. I am guessing immortality makes them all crazy so Celestia and Luna will probably think this is a great idea.

2156125 Exactly what Glitchy said !

This story is funny, I just had had to mark it.
Nothing is wrong with the story it's self and it is a fun idea.
But I wish to say;
While I do understand there fear in losing someone they love. I think they whet too far.
did any one notice they both waited for Celestia and Luna to be gone before doing this to him.
Then why did they not try and regress his mind so that he could be more complacent with his new roll?

Well good luck in the future and hope everything turns out all right.
I hope I see more chapters.

I think this is grounds for a divorce.

this is a strangly funny yet at the same time Dark story. I can see this becoming a Dark fic really easy. I reallly feel for S.A.. If I was in this position I would have escaped and be currently working through the lybrary on how to reverse the spell. That or just find Luna in my dreams and ask for help.

also what was he trying to spell in the Blocks?

2157893 never mind I just read it backwards

Man, if I were shining, I would totally divorce cadence after this. This stuff would infuriate me to no end.

Alright, but they all seem somewhat OOC. Shining never asks how long a while is or even seems all that bothered about escaping, Cadance doesn't ask her husband's opinion and Twilight doesn't either, Cadance is perfectly OK with how uncomfortable she's making Shining Armour and Twilight is not only fine but actually takes pleasure in breastfeeding her own brother. However, I did enjoy reading this, and will certainly continue to do so.

this story is ok but I need to know right now is it going to end with his mind breaking completely and being a baby forever or is cadance going to change him back and just make him a baby for erotic fun? because depending on your answer I will or will not continue reading this story. so please answer happy ending or dark ending?

"hct1b★gnikcuf." -.o?.....

2164042 Read it backwards. The star is a space, by the way.

And... I so called the breastfeeding part!

2164846 OOOOOOHHHH god danmit how did i not realize?? im the king of reversals......

and lol yup you did....

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I am honestly not sure exactly how the ending will play out. It won't be the darkest of dark endings, but it may be subtlety terrifying... in the nicest possible way

Shining, at least, will be happy

2165913 then I wish you the best of luck on this fic. but I will not be reading this anymore.

2164892 It took me a while to realize it as well.

And I suuuuure did!

This is so messed up. I both love and fear it

This is so awkward, but at the same time it's hilarious. I'm gonna forward it to this guy I know to see if it freaks him out.

Thou. Must. CONTINUE!

@kingtiger666 you ain't kidding

Furthermore I did the old calculator trick to decipher the code ... Couldn't really blame SA for teeing off on Cadence I mean if I got turned into a foal I'd be PO'd big time
I give this story because there's no pictures of an angry SA

2165913 That....that's ominous. That's your way of saying Shining Armor is going to be left a foal forever as his former wife wipes his mind WITH THE POWER OF LOVE, isn't it? Poor, poor Shining Armor. Or maybe it'll be some twist I don't see coming, because that all just sounded very ominous. Like when a traitor is told by the person who bought them that they'll get 'just what they deserve' before killing them and/or doing some other horrible thing. Or saying "I promise I won't hit you' just before your buddy comes up and does it.

Still, until then, can't wait to see how it goes. As ever, great work, felt like re-reading it and can't wait for more.

Somehow, this is both hilarious and d'awwful and even something that Twilight and Cadence would do as a joke! Wonder what Celestia and Luna would think of this if they found out....

You simply must continue this. I am beyond intrigued

What does hct1b★gnikcuf mean and why is it naughty?

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Read it backwards, then place a "i" where there is the star : guess what phrase appear.

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Ahhhhhhh.

Didn't see that thank you.

as I posted before Not haveing knowledge of this would leave me SO mad. I would not care what they did I would make their life a living hell. Period. Spank me go ahead I will cry like the foal I am then go right back to doing bad shit again.

the problem is if they had asked him it wouldn't have been so bad.

heck if they asked me if I would do itforthem then told me its because they wanted a kid I would do it for them and play along nicely.

Shouldn't this have Twilight tagged as an alicorn?

when is the next chapter

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The way you said that is not reassuring.

Does this story even exist anymore? The lack of updates annoys me so.

Oooh! I'm loving this so far! Oh noes Shining is going to day care! Poor Shy-Shy! keep it up!

Y am i reading this i hate it wen girls dominate in relationships!?

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