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The hammer is about to drop... good opening :)
(Joke) Alt. Title: Busted!: The Musical!
Personally, I think Dashie would more be a fan of hard rock, stadium rock, acid rock, instrumental rock, indie rock, art rock, heavy metal, nu metal, speed metal, symphonic metal, New Wave Of Equestrian Heavy Metal, grunge, punk and doo wop. But that's just me.
Nice but this seemed to go too fast. I think perhaps you could've ended part one with Apple Bloom deciding to sneak out. Part 2 would be her lying. Part 3 would be her attending the concert. Part 4 would be Applejack and Big Macintosh finding out. And Part 5 would be Apple Bloom being caught.
Still not bad.
Well I went ahead and re-edited it so Part 2 would be her getting caught, and part 3 would be her punishment and Applejack lecturing Rainbow Dash.
Geez, Applejack, hypocrite much? It's not like country is exactly a squeaky clean genre, either. Hell, 'Whiskey Lullaby' was more disturbing than any Foo Fighters song I ever heard.
2019279 She knows, she just makes it a habit to keep Apple Bloom away from such stuff, don't need a little filly picking up a potty mouth now do we?
I love seeing parents with their kids at the concerts. No matter how "explicit" they are.
Oh, haven't heared this song in a while. It's not "All My Life", but ok.
We need a scene in the show when Dashie listens to some metal even though it's basically certain that she does.
Hey she disobeyed Applejack, she gets a but whip!
How exactly do you spank someone with a lasso?
Also does Granny Smith know about this?
2122915 Granny Smith is a very heavy sleeper and Applejack is usually the one that handles Applebloom, and that question about how to spank with a lasso rope, you swing it hard on a butt duh!
2123243 It just seems like the rope itself would be better designed since a lasso is basically a circle. I don't know I guess it just strikes me as weird since it was a lasso and not a hoof that did the spanking.
oh snap she's gonna get a hoof beatin'
I thought AJ was going to hoof beat her black'n'blue to the point she'd be in bed eating apple cabbage soup for two weeks
Nicely done. I'd like to have seen Granny Smith play a part in this (maybe she was out of town?) but it came out well either way.
Woohoo, Applejack acting out of character and abusing kids, what's next time? Raping Applebloom and stabbing out her eyes as a punishment?
3199424 Ah' spanked her
Some one is in trouble
That was mean AJ
2122915 use it like a whip and crack it lol it's goes both ways
Holy........... I don't even know anymore. Like, how did I get here I was looking up Scootalove stories!!!!!!
(mind is blown)
xd77,
So, how come the link you posted in this chapter doesn’t work? And what song did you choose?