Oh I am sure Rarity is feeling like this right now !!!

Oh you little tease!! Nice chapter, for a bonus, that is.

Rarity got it bad, for Spike swag!

...DAMN!!!

Still a good story.

Spike's swag. Rarity don't can stay dreaming. She have attack.

I laughed way more than i should....

To be trolled by a dream....it happens to us all at some point

i'm afraid if you do this once more your gonna make spike small or something XD

Aw dang. Dream sucker-punched again. Damn you and you trisker ways!
[shakes eagle-fist at you, then lowers it and hands you a card with a lion paw]
Discord would like to have a word with you...
[throws up a hood and melts into shadows]

2534921 It a give away when you read the title...

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Noted. But still, there was no real indication of her slipping into her dreams/fantacy, so it's easy to forget.

1896123 If you haven't already, check out the Bonus Chapter.

Draw... Draw... Draw... I feel like I need my editing pen so badly.

drawer - a box-shaped container that fits into a piece of furniture in such a way that it can be drawn out horizontally to reach its contents.

withdraw a long black phallus,

verb tense - withdrew

After the fourth mistake in the first 2 paragraphs I stopped. I would highly suggest finding yourself a proofreader or editor so that you can catch these before publishing.

2674187 hey fuck you, I spent hours and hours reading all of my stories, over and over just to make sure I tried my best.

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My apologies, that should have been handled more diplomatically. It's always best to have someone else read over your stories before publishing though. Many times you don't catch your own mistakes, no writer does. Having a different pair of eyes can catch mistakes that your eyes might just glance over, such as the aforementioned 'draw' and verb tense issues.

I think i know whats going on. Princess Luna wants to see some actual SpaRity action, so she sends those dreams to Rarity in order to motivate her. I wonder if Rarity and Spike actually seeing the same dreams simultaneously? That would be a trick.

Rarity should realize that dragon have two phallus.

2811756 that's the point. It's all a dream she doesn't know. I am seriously considering writing another chapter that is NOT a dream.

2815169 You might as well before Rarity dragonapped Spike and does it the sexy way.

2815184 now THAT would be entertaining, right there in the middle of town Spike going through farmer's market and all he hears is "SPIIIKE!" right before he's jumped

also

raising some kittens that turned out to be baby manticores.

CLASSIC CMC moment

2907969 Yeah, I just thought about anything cute but still in the CMC style of cluelessness. Glad you like it.

At this rate, by the time she's in heat, she'll march straight to the library, drag Spike out of bed and FINALLY get some without being dreamblocked.

Not a bad story good work.

She's gonna end up going crazy if this keeps up.

Would kinda like to see that.

LOL I just feel on the floor laugh. I always love it when Rar lust after my main man Spike. I want another one. I would love to see one where she ends up day dreaming about him while she is hanging out with her friends.

Sequel

WHY A DREAM?????

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That's a line Celestia herself wouldn't cross...

Mmmm I love the story! Even if it's her dream... So much passion between them. Just don't like the crotchboobs but didn't pay much attention to it. JUST. SPARITY. One question: is Spike his actual size in that fic? I imagined him small reading "his tiny claw" but then again while reading "growl" I thought of bigger Spike. Please, I must know!

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You definitely should!