I own and tour with a travelling circus, the cool kind with performing animals and fire breathers. Not those crappy ones with ballet and shit. I also own a pet shop.
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Walks in, sees 0 likes and 7 dislikes. Not sure if safe to read or 7 people were idiots.
Mmm, maybe add a WS warning for all those that don't enjoy that?
A little confusing in the imagery at times, maybe a bit too vague in describing their positions, but overall this wasn't bad.
Some of the orgasms could have been drawn out, and all in all a bit more descriptive, eh.. yeah
If you want to cater to the WS Crowd, you might want some more description there, as well.
All in all, pretty enjoyable. And Cheerilee Twilight is always nice.
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Good idea, Thanks I'll add it now.
Water Sports? THAT's the reason it has more dislikes than likes? Well, I guess not everyone is a "fan" of it.
Sorry, but nope.
This gave me the biggest whyboner.
This wasn't half bad. I have to agree with 1069640, at times it was a little tricky to picture who was positioned where, and who was doing what to who as well. Thankfully I was able to figure out enough from the descriptions you did have, and still found this interesting. Though after finding out this had WS in it, I was a little disappointed that the scene involving it was so abrupt. Still I enjoyed it enough to give you a fav and a thumbs up! And if you enjoy WS, you might consider checking out my two fics - "Apple Bucking with a Beauty" and "Cadence's Naughty Little Fetish". Oh and one last remark - The pairing of Twilight and Cheerilee was more enjoyable then I expected!
I can enjoy watersports but if more was added than it would be awesome!
It really didn't do it for me, I was kinda getting into it but most of it just didn't really gain much of a 'rise' from me. And that pissing part killed it for me.
hold on...
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my first reaction to this...
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and then...
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What is Watersports?
Loved this story :) u must do more watersport stories if it's not to much trouble?
Someone who ships Twilight and Cheerilee?!
I never seen a person that also ships them!
Its like a I FOUND WALDO!
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Now here's a punny Cheerilee:
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1670423 Piss play.
Well this was interesting. I figured Cheerilee would be the dominant one. Overall good story.