This story is a sequel to Harmony of Chaos
Shadow leaves Mobius for Equestria after Discord's defeat, hoping to make a fresh start. However, his friendship with Twilight develops until it becomes stronger than he'd anticipated, and leads him to a future he'd never dreamed possible.
However, while Shadow's life takes on fairy tale proportions, Twilight is faced with diffivult emotional hurdles...ones that she will never escape.
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I came.
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1796569 You came?!
What the heck?! 
This isn't a clopfic! 
1804624 That's not going to stop me.
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Was the scene in "Hearts, Hooves, and Horns" just that good?
1804632 Willpower.
That's what you've got.
1804734 Oh my yes.
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...glad to hear it. I do try to make things realistic. Guess I did a good job here.
I might've clopped, but I got too caught up in the nice romance.
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Glad to hear that. It's supposed to be romance. I never meant it to be a clopfic, but I've had a lot of practice in other stories with...hot and heavy scenes, and I guess it carried over to ponies. I'm told I write them quite well.
Yeah I only clip to stuff in the clopping area.
Great chapter, will continue waiting for more and browsing while I wait...
LOL The Fourth Wall, it be Oblitir--
Oblitur--
Obblytu-- 
It Broken 
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Heh, yeah. Twistie takes after her Mom that way. It's also a bit of an ANimaniacs reference.
Finnaly got around to reading this. I have been really busy lately working on two fanfica plus collage. Now that I have some free time I decided to check this story out. It is really well set up though now I kinda wish there was a story telling of how sonic and RD accually met; that would be awsome. Anyways guess I shall read on. I am really liking the story so far.
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See "Harmony of Chaos" and "Discordant Melody" on this site in my stories, in that order.
In equestria, You don't scare shadow, Shadow scares you.
So this is where that sex tag came from. I was begining to wounder about that. Interesting, When you were doing this story the twilight alicorn thing had just started up. Or if I remember correctly it did. Kinda interesting since most people end the story right there but I see that there are more chapters. Interesting.
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I take it you're refferring to the second half, right?
an interesting crossover. I felt like it seemed rushed toward the end though. It is good to know that you do get better. 'Whatever it takes, I love you' is perhaps my all time favorite. this was very interesting story and seeing Alicorn twilight after her becoming an alicorn is interesting as well. I see you also wnet into how immortality might effect the mind as well. But the most interesting thing was the fact that Shadow is perfect for her since he is immortal. Never really thought to much about the connection untill she became an alicorn. Over all awsome story but it is nothing compared to the one you are currently doing right now.
also interesting how you saw Discord becomming a good guy and then it actually happened a few weeks ago.
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It did become a little rushed at the end, mostly because I ran out of plot but I didn't want to leave it open ended.
Any chance you'll be reading "Harmony of Chaos" and "Discordant Melody" sometime soon? That will give a lot of background to this universe that you're missing.
Yeah, this was written out before that episode.
Now, if you read "Harmony of Chaos", you'll see the real irony about that. Won't spoil it for you, though.
2089570 sure I will read it later tonight.
Hm...this sounds familiar...
Take out the song bit, though.
This was a great side story/sequel to the main story! Now to go read the last in the series!
The first sentence of this chapter is missing a 'w'. Read it to find out where.
Discord's timing and proposal is just so perfectly chaotic.
I must know..... WHAT IN CELESTIA'S MANE IS RAINBOW DASH REFERENCING?!?!
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The Saturday morning cartoon of Sonic. The one with the Freedom fighters and Knothole village.
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I really need to go back and rewatch the show then if I wasn't even able to pick up on that reference
The Archieverse, I assume?
I like how Shadow accurately predicted the series finale.
This story was hilarious! Why would Twilight call Discord daddy? He’s the God of CHAOS for Celesia’s sake! Can you please make more chapters? I wanna see how Twilight’s and Shadow’s foals grow up and if they gain immortality.
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Because in the prequel to this, it's revealed that Celestia and Discord - in this timeline - were once in a relationship and that was to imply that they are again now.
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Huh?? Sorry, I get confused very easily.
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You asked why Twilight would call Discord "Daddy".
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Oh okay. Thanks. BTW I sent you a friend request.
I'm dying of laughter at the current moment. 'Have you been a good boy?' HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XD!
Imagine Sonic and all his friends there. And seeing Shadow faint they'd die laughing. I know I am.
Morbius
Morbing time