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I cried and came at the same time...
I crame.
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I thought this was a humanized fic until you wrote "hooves".
Now I want an explanation for cars and guns.
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This is why I watch you. You are utterly insane.
it was weird, but i liked it
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That must have been an emotional ride, I'll have to try it sometime.
I can't like or dislike this, because this has happened before, and I'm sure many people know what that incidents name was. As the saying goes, "you can only push so hard before it breaks."
I see what you did there...
What is this? Is Candle Jack behind this thing? Why, yes!
1684528 You love the fact that I showed that gif, don't you?
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HATE ME BREAK ME DOWN
>Sether FTW
1684595 It was.. glorious.
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Hm, you make an excellent point. Guess I will have to read this.
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This is a great fan fiction! It brings me great pleasure reading about the murder and death of alot of ponys... Just not enough of them died.
Thank you. Two years ago I was bullied by my so-called friends. No one gave a shit that I was suffering. I wanted to do these things, and I'm forever thankful that I didn't. I'm glad you wrote this.
1684461 Oh you.
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this was obviously done ad-lib replacing human names with pony names. the universe is clearly human, the use of firearms is human, the reference to hunting is human, the overall psychology of the characters and the speech patterns both reflect american high-schoolers.
If you haven't realized this is a site for fanfiction in the style of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, not this glorified anti-bullying propaganda with names replaced. I love and tolerate all people, but I do not appreciate stories like this cluttering up my searches for a proper story.
-BuckShot
omg frikin epic
I read this last night, after the internet went off before I was going to go to bed after fixing some stuff online.. which I couldn't do because the internet went off. Luckily, I thought, I had pulled up this story in the readable state, aka going into the chapter.
I... I didn't quite expect what I read. I saw that it was Mature, I saw that it was Dark...
But I wasn't prepared for this.
I have a huge, supreme hatred for Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon anyways, and this story doesn't help much.. at least 'till the end. I didn't expect myself to be trapped within the story.. unwillingly.. kinda. I found myself uncontrollably shaking, and I even slammed my hand on my desk and nearly shouted what Scoots said when she was going berserk.
In short, this is how I look whenever I see Diamond Tiara:
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You can see that I have a very big hatred for her role in this story.
All in all, this is a very big hit on my emotional side, and I actually officially had trouble sleeping for the first time in my life.
Congratulations. - Sorin "Kalreas" Kanire
cool
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This was written with Scootaloo in high school, so in that time span, a lot has happened. Think: In 2000, VCRs were big. I think. But just a half decade or so later, Blu-Ray's the newest thing. As humans and ponies progress, new technologies are developed, and possibly some sort of automobile could have been invented. Also, some species of deer or something might have migrated to Equestria or somethingerface. Except I'm about 73% sure deer don't migrate...
But anyway, This is set in a future-Equestria. I wasn't really thinking anyone would point out them. Also, there have got to be lots more future-equestrian fictions out there.
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Also, if it was humanized, I would have put Human in the categories section.
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To add to that, I based this partially off of a music video, and the deer processing kit was essential to be a realistic-ish way of Scootaloo obtaining those weapons. The guns were partially just for a way to take hostage at the end, also to knock out a few ponies at the near-end. Here's the link to the music video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CGUw0und0HM&list=FLnOdU1KJxAvD7inx1a5_36w&index=49&feature=plpp_video
I hope I've answered a few questions, and if you have anymore, feel free to ask.
I loved this story! it had everything i love! blood guts and excruciating murder for different pony's. I didn't like sweetie belle's part since im a big sweetie belle fan lol
but over all i thought it needed to be a bit....darker....more detail with the murder's of her ex-friends. and yes i do believe they Crame - Regidar
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if this was written in an alternate universe or a distant future, why didnt you butcher your own OC's?
none of what you wrote explains away any of what I said. the only thing i could think of is if this was set in generation 2 with generation 2 AU logic
so yeah,
-Buckshot
The likes and dislikes are the same
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Not anymore.
Strange... Even though the ratings equal out to nearly half and half, I'm completely fine with it.
I...what...no, just no. THIS IS NOT OKAY TO MAKE JOKES ABOUT! I'VE CONSIDERED SUICIDE. IT'S NOT RIGHT TO MAKE JOKES ABOUT WHAT BULLIED KIDS WILL DO WHEN PUSHED FAR ENOUGH. THE REASON I WATCH THIS SHOW IS TO LEARN LOVE AND COMPASSION. THIS IS JUST FUCKED UP. GOOD WRITING, HORRIBLE STORY. I WON'T HIT DISLIKE, BUT I WON'T HIT LIKE.
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Calm down. I'm not posting this as a joke. I've considered suicide, also. Multiple times. I've slit my wrists before, too. I know this is serious, and that's why I posted it. I was suffering from severe exclusion, and poured my fucking soul out onto a keyboard, and this is what came out.
I see what you're saying, and it is definitely wrong to make jokes about a subject such as this. But this story is no joke. In all actuality, it's the exact opposite. I'm beginning to understand why the likes and dislikes are almost the same, because some people just like clop/gore fics, and some people think this is completely and disgustingly wrong.
In a way, this kind of IS an anti bullying add. Hopefully, some people will have their minds changed when they read this. Watch that music video a few comments up from this. This fic is (in a nutshell) that video expanded. There aren't 1,000 dislikes and 1,000 likes on that, mostly just likes. It's pretty much the same story, just Billy Talent is kinda famous, therefor making people more prone to liking his stuff.
I didn't mean this as a joke. Not a bit.
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Sorry, it's just, I've come close to this also. I still suffer so many mental issues from the 14 years of it, that I'll wake up with scratches, cuts, hell this morning I woke up and found out I had slugged each of my kidneys until they were screaming in pain. And I do that in my sleep. I just can't stand to read this stuff. I'm fine with Grimdark, just not this. Sorry if I came off as rude
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It's okay bro. You don't have to be sorry for anything.
I think this can be labeled as a Fusclopagore fic.
Future- Fu
Scootaloo- S & A between p & g
Clop- clop
Gore- gore
Fusclopagore
I'm not going to lie. It was good but you could have been a lot more discriptive
for example when diamond tiara was raping scoots in the first scene you could have talked about how if it was her first time how her hyman broke and the blood that spilled from her vagina
and when dt shooved the dildos up her button you could have said how her insides were painfully expanding
but enough of the bad. I liked how you explained all of the things that the hook was ripping from silver spoon.
Oh not to be rude becouse this was great... but it will never happen. Unless it is planned to perfection
otherwise great and it actually sent a few chills down my spine
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Thanks, bro. Glad you liked it.
For the record, all writing I have ever done has never been preplanned on any level except my mind. I think on the next thing I'm planning to write, with all these things I know that I need to look out for, I'll be a lot more careful.
Glad to be a help
That was dark.
Thumbs up for this story. Could it have been better? Yes. Did it get the message across? Yes.
Bullying, fake people, fake 'friends', idiots, and ignorant / disrespectful / non caring observers and adults are what make me hate people as a whole. I'm glad to see some people aren't totally blind to the happenings and I for one am glad this fic exists. It brought up a lot of old feelings I have on the subject(s).
I respect the author, I respect the contents, I respect that it was written as a vent which I can completely understand, and I respect the opinions of others who have liked / disliked and commented. All in all great job my friend. I thank you for writing this story.
Though I apologize in advance for my odd rant...
I liked the story :3
I definitely tried to look at how the story progressed and flowed together, read my share of bully related stories where kids push each other past the breaking point. I found it odd you used 1st person to tell it with, since it's a bit hard to write down the events and deaths you've caused after you're dead yourself. also a missed opportunity to go into the heads of each victim as well, describing their thoughts and feelings at the moment of their deaths. would've been interesting to see what applebloom and sweetie were thinking before scootaloo finished them off.
but mostly, your story is just an account of a suicidal girl who attempted to kill everyone that wronged her before taking her own life. it's hard to pull any lesson from that other than, those who are bullied will eventually become homicidal killers. crappy takeaway, ya know? killers are created by bullies, that's what I read here. everyone struggles through school, even the bullies too, but you had scootaloo on constant abuse from everyone she knows. not a single person to go to help for, at all?
well, it's your headcanon, but the 1st person narrative just didn't work for me. if it were the last writings of scootaloo before she carried out the deaths of her tormentors, that'd be something. it also doesn't conclude in a way I found meaningful. good use of detail and all, but it's not a story I can like just on it's merits alone. was just, unsatisfying in every way to me
Is it strange that i gave likes to tje comments but not the story?