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Fishnchipz18


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It's the middle of World War II and somewhere in Manehattan, a certain grey pony steps into a small little bar that will change her life forever...

Fluffy Octavia X Spike fic that I've been wanting to finish for a long time now.


(Set in an alternate universe for obvious reasons.)


Author's note: With regards to Spike's age in this universe, he is older than he is in the show, yet still looks like he's on the younger side.

Cover Art by: http://yikomega.deviantart.com/

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 59 )

Glad to see you're writing again. Good job.

Well. I can say you have improve a lot since the last time. There aren't many fics abut this pair, so it's really good to fing one.
The only major problen I found here it's Spike accent. I'm not saying is wrong or anything... I just freaking hated it.

1624728 Thank you so much! :twilightsmile:

1624823 Thanks mate! Let me know on how your website is going! :pinkiehappy:

1625035 Thank you very much! :pinkiesmile: As far as the accent goes, fair enough. :eeyup: I figured that there would be people that wouldn't like the accent, so I was kind of expecting it when I was writing it.

Pretty damn good! There just isn't enough Spiktavia.~

1626389 Thank you! I agree, there needs to be more Spiketavia. :rainbowdetermined2:

"Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine."

1635450 Heheheh, Oh how that fits so well. I have to admit that line actually did not run through my head while I was writing this surprisingly. :pinkiegasp:

So good! Always awesome seeing a well made SpikexOctavia story, and this is very well made.

Honestly couldn't see anything in this story that I didn't like, the setting was great, the accent was interesting, and the fluff was pretty nice.

Great stuff Fishnchipz18 I only wish that I had read it sooner.:moustache:

1680361 I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! :pinkiehappy: I'm really happy that I've made stories that people can enjoy. :twilightsmile:

1682754
No doubt there, I certainly enjoyed reading it and I'm sure everyone else did. Keep up the great work.

Classy, very classy.:moustache:
Romantic setting of times forgotten make this more, appreciated to read.:twilightsmile:

2216242 Thank you very much! And I agree, I love to read stories in settings like this one, it gives me a more, I guess classic feel, but that's just me. :pinkiehappy:

Damn, this is a uiniqe pairing:rainbowlaugh: Very impressive, I really enjoyed it. Odd to see Spike has a bartender but it was new to see, damn, you're good at this, though the romance seems a tad bit rushed you make sure to put time lapses, very impressive, I'm honestly hoping to see what you come up with next though I think you may need to put his as teen with it being alchoal:derpytongue2:

2236222 Thank you very much for liking my story! Out of all the stories that I have written, this one was the most fun for me to write. I really wanted to think outside the box with this one and had such a fun time writing it. I think you might find my next story also interesting as it is another crack-pairing with Spike. :rainbowwild: As far as putting it as teen, to be honest that thought hadn't crossed my mind but that is a very good point! :twilightsmile:

2240556 Never a problem:ajsmug: I can tell it seemed like a really fun story to write, a crack ship huh? So your going to write him with one of the Mane Six? As long as it's not Rarity you have my full attention:yay: And yep, things that deal with swearing, drinking, smoking, sex, blood and gore would deal with teen and above:twilightsmile:

2240791 Well actually crack-ships would mostly be outside the Mane Six, which is what I like to write. So it won't be any of them that will star in my next fic. And yeah, I was only thinking about blood and sex with regards to the teen rating. :derpytongue2:

2240855 Ah......nice, I hear ya, this should really be fun then:yay: Can't wait to read:ajsmug: And agreed, this is going to be fun.:derpytongue2:

2240978 I can't wait to release it and hopefully have you guys enjoy it! :twilightsmile:

2245613 Badass, hoping I'll enjoy it:ajsmug:

Very good short romance here. I like almost any pairing with Spike (hate Sparity) and Octavia looks like a cute pair. I found this worth my time... Not that my time is all that important. :)

10 out of 10 for Alternate universe
9 out of 10 for Romance
9 out of 10 for grammar
9 out of 10 for overall story.
1 like and a fave your way. Good job.

3601271
Thank you very much! I'm happy that this was worth your time! :twilightsmile:

Riz

3637285 You say WW2, their WW2 tech is like ours or slight a bit advance ?

3704807 Um, I don't particularly understand your question. :derpyderp2:
But if you are asking me what their weapon technology would be like compared to ours, I think it would be something similar to our weaponry. I don't think it would be more advanced at all, perhaps even less advanced than our weapon tech in WW II. I hope that answers your question! :twilightsmile:

Riz

3730183

Yes. That is the answer I'm looking for...
TQ

3731589 Glad I could help! :pinkiehappy:

That was a interesting story, I've been thinking about a Spike x Octavia story for a while and that shown me that it can work. Keep up the great work

3847693 Thank you very much! :pinkiehappy: I'm happy I confirmed a ship for you as well! :twilightsmile:

I love to see more of this shipping!
the feels! It's alive, IT'S ALIVE! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

3986590 I can't exactly recall what drove me to write this ship, :derpyderp2: But I'm happy that I did choose Spiketavia! :derpytongue2:

3992682 I got a fic in the making that will be a SpikeDash.
should be ready in a few months

3993117 That's good to hear, keep calm and write on! :rainbowlaugh: (Bad pun is bad)

The Inquisition finds this to be an acceptable portrayal of Spike.

4021218 You shall find no deviation from the Emperor's light here! (Except for my fallen angel brethren) ALL OF US ARE TOTALLY LOYAL. EVERY ONE OF US.

4032274 (Psst, dude. I think he knows...) OH HEY THERE BRO, SORRY WE WERE BUSY PRAYING TO THE EMPEROR THAT WE LOVE SO MUCH. NOTHING TO SEE HERE. :scootangel:

4033015 You're wearing Eldar armour.:ajbemused:

4033782 >Roleplaying as the Dark Angels. :derpytongue2:

Real beauty you've got here, my fine fellow. :twilightsmile:

4306642 Thank you mate! Glad you liked it. :pinkiehappy:

Sooooooooooo Cute!!!!:heart:

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