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Math Spook


Spook does not take himself or his fanfiction seriously. You shouldn't either.

Comments ( 9 )

I don’t know whether I like this or not.

Decided to read it anyway.

Conclusion: I did not like it.

Reasoning: well, I don’t really have a reasoning as to why I did not like it, I guess that butt jokes are not my thing.

It was a forced meme and wasn't funny.

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Don't blame me for forcing it. I didn't post anything about AJ's cloaca outside that one thread. Honestly, I was pretty surprised when it took off. It's the kind of gross-out humor you expect from a 12 year old. (Though I'm not 12, except maybe in mental age.)

11866731
By posting this you are basically still forcing it. You should have let it die with other retarded ideas now lost in /mlp/'s archives.

11866755
What, I'm not allowed to post my work? Surely you're joking. You know, some other anon in that thread said that the most entertaining thing about Applejack's cloaca was how much it offended people, and I'm starting to agree with him. You didn't have to click on this story. You don't have to be on this story's comments page arguing with me. But you did, and you are. I warned you in the long summary: Applejack's cloaca will defile your mind and blight your soul. I think you're becoming its next victim.

This was mildly entertaining. Could've been better, but short chapters make it not too bad to go thru. It also should be rated Mature, as even if anon touching the inside of her cloaca is okay (unlikely), there's also the genital inspection chapter (very iffy), and the Fluttershy all the way through (definitely Mature rated).

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Sir, this is a story where cartoon pony has a magical hammerspace combined candy vag and butt hole like Kirby in reverse and sillier. The serious sourpuss festival is somewhere else, probably past the tight sphincter of the alpha anal retentive asshole.

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You really think it should be rated Mature? I thought I was firmly on the Teen side of the line. Like, "Inspection" is about a very iffy idea, but it doesn't describe the inspections at all. And "Waterspout" is gross, but all that it says about the water's flow through Fluttershy is, "into Fluttershy's mouth, out of Fluttershy's behind." Probably the moment in "Bedtime" when Anon enters Applejack's cloaca is the edgiest, but even that is vague enough and quick enough that I think it's still Teen. Regardless, I'm glad you found it mildly entertaining!

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My first fic had Zipporwhill peeing lemonade for the CMC to drink, and that alone reached mature without any real detail or even being a continuous flow. Granted, that was years ago, but in general, this site's strict about ratings.

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