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Akataja


Just one of many MLP Fans out there :) also german writer, taking small commissions for stories and art

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This story is a sequel to Dragons like it hot


The last Hearts Warming Eve for Ember was really exciting and ended with Ember laying an egg... and Thorax is the father?
One year later it is finally time that Thorax learn about it.

This Story is Written for

GaPJaxie

for Jinglemas 2023

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 17 )

One year later it is finally time that Thorax learn about it.

What took her so long?

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Well first there was denial, then came the anger...

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It was a busy year, they had to prepare for an epic season final and kick some Centaure-, Changelingqueen- and annoying Brad butts :D

That was a great sequel but I did notice thorax and embers daughters name change in chapter 4 from hope to holly back to hope

"Twilight, I am glad to see you," Ember said and she hoped it was the right name, she knew at least three ponies with a similar name!

No you got it right ember

Well this is a pretty interesting start of a story so it looks like ember is preparing for the little one for winter but apparently the egg is acting weird so she asked Twilight and Fluttershy for some help about the situation but it looks like Fluttershy figure it out already now they just need to ask about thorax about the situation since both of them knews about ember and thorax relationship

Ember was still blushing when she and Thorax entered his room, and another changeling, his brother Pharnyx, changeling closed the door.

pharynx

"Usual we don't but how it turned out music has a real good effect on our eggs and the hatching youngling" She remembered how Garbl played these stupid little drums for the eggs, mainly to make the dragons around laugh and turn on the flames on max heat, but also it turned out the music made the younglings inside grow better. "also Spike showed me some songs from the ponies. It seems like ponies have a tradition called lullaby."

Garble

Looks like the girls arrived to the changelings kingdom and ember talk with thorax about the egg and turns out he kind of figures that's his kids because he can feel the love energy from her and even thorax told her about the lifespan that's changelings will last a little bit longer but not as much as the dragons and she felt bad for him the situation he's in I wonder how they're going to work this thing out

The doors opened again and Ember and Thorax came back and everyone was looking over at them. Pharnyx walked behind them, he was caring the black egg very carefully.

Pharynx

Oh wow okay so it looks like ember decided to stay here how this will work out hopefully both of them knows what they're going to do

"Pharnyx will take care of her," said Thoray and nodded. "My brother was born to protect the queen... littery, he is a soldier drone, a fighter. I trust him, ever since we lost our Mother, the queen, he seemed so lost, without any purpose, but since the egg is here I can feel his spirit rising, he is full of hope again."

Pharynx
Thorax

“Wont she have a special position during the dragons? I mean you are the Dragon Lord.”

“And your mother was the Queen of Changelings, still you had no special position.”

That actually made it very complicated situation for the little one

No so fast! You remember what I told you about the wildlife?” Thorax picked up leave form the ground and gave it a gentle blow so it levitated over the water and all of a sudden something came out of the water! Ember could only see it for a second, but it looked like a giant worm covered with horns and claws! It was around the same size as her father was, or even taller, considering the idea that most of his body was still under water.

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“There were so many eggs, I cant kill these creatures just because they are protecting they eggs, I would do the same to every creatures that is a threat to Hope.”

That's actually pretty sweet of you ember you really did change throughout the years

I got to say this was a pretty adorable story although there was a couple of spelling error but other than that I really like it so it looks like thorax and the rest of the changelings are preparing to celebrate and ember helping setting up the celebration even getting the stuff for them alongside with thorax and she felt something for him same with thorax as well but once they got to the cave they've got what they needed and even defeating the creatures and it's pretty awesome how she did it even without hurting them and on they're way back they finally confess how much they really care for each other and how much they love their child no matter what she is and whatever the future lies for these three it will be a new beginning of Hope for Equestria well I got to say this was a nice story again love the shipping between those two keep up the good work and Merry Christmas

That was very sweet! I loved how Ember finally embraced her feelings for Thorax and the egg and how Thorax just immediately accepted the fact that he's gonna be a dad! The ending was especially heartwarming with how the newborn brought hope to the Changeling hive.

A very wholesome little fic of one of my favourite underrated couples. Well done! :twilightsmile:

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