Sunset Shimmer returns to Equestria to gather information on her friends.
A Jinglemas 2023 story for Bandy.
Happy Holidays!
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AAAH so stoked to read this!!! Thank you for the wonderful gift. Full comment dropping as soon as I can get away from the christmas eve cooking
The pleasure is all ours.
I love the dynamic between pony AJ pony Rarity. Sunburst's scheming is spot-on, as usual. A super-cute read overall, definitely something I couuld curl up in front of a fireplace with hot cocoa and rip through over and over. Thank you for your gift! Happy Hearth's Warming!
Just the right amount of cute!
The not-quite-twist made me feel good for seeing it coming just a little ways in advance. :)
If I may offer two proofreading suggestions:
admit it admit it
(Typo) Double “admit it” here.
Her mane an’ tail always seem tah look.”
I think there’s a missing word or phrase at the end of this sentence. Nice? Good? Like she put effort into ‘em?
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Thanks for the feedback. I'll take a look. I suspect that sometimes a word or two gets dropped when I copy it over from Word. Otherwise I just screwed up. Either way, I'll fix it once I get off from work (kind of disappointing that I have to work Christmas Eve and Christmas day).