In Everfree Castle thousands of years in the past, Anon puts two very special fillies to bed.
A little one shot I wrote because I wanted more stories of filly Celestia and Luna.
Cover art is by julunis14. Derpibooru code is 3038164.
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This...this is beautiful.
...why am I crying?!
;-;
You know what would be a good followup of this one shot?
Where luna is back and the 2 sister reconcile and they both visit anons grave.
You can also add a part where celestia and luna tells twilight about anon and how much he meant to them how they became the mares they are now because of him.
That would be beautiful.
This story needs a sequel or a bonus chapter. It is too emotional of a story not to get one.
ok this was good I will give you that, it's one of the better one-off stories and what I am about to say has nothing to do with your story
I did not cry when reading this story, barely felt any sadness, this is mostly because I have blocked myself from feeling emotions in the past, yes you can do that when you are young, but it sucks not being able to feel the emotions that other's can feel if it is based on something that I can relate to then yes, and well I did feel a ping of sadness but nothing more,
either way, it's a good story, I wish it was longer, adding up more so there is more weight to the line "I Love You Dad" I think that would have made the story better but aside from that good job
Promises do break at times
However never let that stop you
A broken promise is only broken if you dont learn to accept that it happened
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I agree. Though if the author doesn't want to do a sequel, maybe just add another scene where, after Luna returns, we see her approaching the statue just as Celestia did here. I would love to see Luna's perspective.
Now I’m sad. But it’s a bitter sweet type of sad. Nice little short story you got here.
Like others have said it’d be nice to have a bonus chapter with a a follow up or something like it.
But to me at least it’s also fine as is too.
I would love a squeal
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I've thought about writing a follow up story, but I wouldn't be able to do it justice. The idea I have currently is a prequel story of Anon meeting/finding Celestia and Luna to get them to the Everfree and that would have to be much longer (likely more than 20k words). The problem is, I've already got another fic I've been working on throughout the year and I have been horrendous when it comes to publishing chapters. I also would want to improve my writing quality first, because I don't want to deliver a subpar sequel to this.
If anyone wants to use this fic and write their own sequel/prequel, I'd be more than happy for them to have a crack at it. If not, then maybe I'll get around to writing my ideas one day, but also maybe not.
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Yeah, that line probably would've been more impactful if I had put more before it. It was just late at night/very early in the morning for me when I finished this and I really didn't think this story was going to do as well as it did. If I had put more dedication to this, I might've been able to squeeze out more from my squishy thinker bits. This was just a quick thing I decided to write one night, finish the next, then edit and publish the next next night at the same time I very tardily published the most recent chapter of my main story.
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Here you go
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I love the mystery of it all. badass story man, I'd leave it be.
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Dude, with that comment ya gave me a flashback. Theres a story that in teory could be a prequel to this one, in that story Anon is a mercenary Isekai'd from earth and he had the job to transport baby celestia from the lands that got frozen (before the three tribes unification) to the lands now know as equestria, is a story in progress. In that one Anon is bitter and rude, living day to day in the dangerous lands before Harmony. But if we think of one of the potential conclutions, with Anon's cold hearth melted by Luna and Celestia after arriving at equestria... well we can have this one.
The story is Preunification Anon
Oh yeah I had imaginary sister cause I’m an ONLY child. Unrelatable protagonist
A very cute and sad story.
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Preunification Anon was a big inspiration for this story. That, and I'm having a go at learning Lullaby for a Princess on piano. So the Sisters have been kind of on my mind recently.
It's a shame that Preunification Anon is on hiatus. I loved that fic and I read every chapter as soon as it came out. But I understand that sometimes you lose interest in what you're writing, have other things that use your energy instead, or you just don't have the motivation to write.
It would be nice to see more stories set in Ancient Equestria, even if they had a larger focus on OC's or had very little mention of Celestia or Luna in them. I'm a sucker for reading stories set in unfamiliar settings, and I don't know how many or how few Ancient Equestria stories there actually are out there.
You might have read it already, but another story set in an unfamiliar setting that I really loved was Seaborn. That one's rated M though, so I'm not sure if I'm allowed to link it.
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Seaborn is a bit too much on the M side of the spectrum for my taste, but Preunification Anon still is one my favorites on this site.
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Seaborn, that one is on my watchlist, just waiting for another chapter. A good one too even if a little too much into M, but well, can always skips those parts xd
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You know what kind of vibes I'm getting from this? When Unus Annus ended, and the annual video upload tradition of them revisiting the coffin goes on. This past year especially was heartbreaking, since they uploaded it awhile after the date. The story of it lives on, even after death....
This could be an idea to write about.
But, again, I loved reading this story, and I would accept this if it were just a one-shot. It's incredible.
Author, this was fantastic! I have to say, good work on writing Luna and Celestia’s characters. The detail about the small bat plushy was also pretty cute, to be honest!
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LOL! The last message you responded to was hilarious! That was one good “squeal,” amiright?
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I checked it out. I’m now traumatized… ik it was rated M, but still… I wish I can erase it from my mind.
-Davidtin, user of Fimfiction since 2021
Love it! I also want more Tia/Woona fics!!! At this point, it might even be a good idea to make character tags for them since they’re usually very different characters from their grown-up counterparts.
Great one shot (and just great in general)
Recorded for the audiobook version to come soon!
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I love it!!! Especially the foley (heh) work and the music. You gotta tell me what music you used, cause it's the exact kind of stuff I really like to just sit down and listen to.
Yeah nah honestly, I'm honoured someone would take the time to do a reading of something I wrote. Never did I think that would happen, and that's awesome. Maybe one day I can scrounge something together that again gets me on your list, lol. Once again, I loved the reading, and wonderful job putting it together!
I don't cry much reading stories. I almost did reading this one. Absolutely beautiful. I wish we could have a follow up of Luna going to see Anon's statue after she's back, Celestia going to see him the year Luna got back, or even Twilight and the main six finding the statue and wondering what it meant. But that one chapter was still enough, it was pure beauty to read.