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So, they gave Rarity a Free Makeover coupon for each girl?
Why did they give her so much power?!
Great story!
11751944
What do you get an independent gal who has everything she could ever want? Coupons!!!
11751948
They either forgot that this is Rarity Belle they're dealing with or they are VERY aware of that fact.
Either way, it is hilarious and I can see each girl's surprise makeover having its own story written around it.
This was a pretty cute story. Short and sweet, with the same sort of vibe as the Equestria Girls CYOA shorts. The comedy was there, although I felt like the pacing might have diminished the impact a bit, with much more buildup than was necessary. All in all, this was pretty good.
11751955
I do think that would be an interesting premise. Definitely, something I am considering exploring after the holidays!
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I understand! Some of the scenes were specifically requested to be descriptive, so that is what I went with when writing!