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A Musing For The Changing Queen

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While taking Chrysalis to the fair for a friendship lesson, Starlight accidentally inebriates herself. And Chrysalis has to deal with it for the whole day.

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Solver

Solver #1 · Aug 1st, 2023 · 3 · ·

A nice little story, thank you for writing it.

Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #2 · Aug 2nd, 2023 · 2 · ·

What did she summon that made her drunk?

Rewan Demontay #3 · Aug 2nd, 2023 · 1 · ·

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That I leave to your imagination.

cozystar

cozystar #4 · Aug 2nd, 2023 · 1 · ·

This story makes sense. Adorable

Ralanost

Ralanost #5 · Aug 3rd, 2023 · 2 · ·

The vocabulary choices feel pretty random at times. Like they were plucked from a thesaurus. And how you chose to mangle words to represent Starlight being drunk made this difficult to read. The idea was interesting but I don't think it felt as it should as I stumbled through the mire of words.

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