Many moons ago, the famous Flim Flam Corporation took control of Equestria. The Princesses, the Royal Guard, and the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony all fought valiantly, but were defeated and executed. Many ponies were captured and turned into cyborgs, acting as ruthless enforcers against the small pockets of resistance, as the natural world of Equestria was industrialized to serve Flim and Flam's interests.
But on Nightmare Night, as the lunarizer raises the moon that was once Luna's into the sky, Flim and Flam are met by some unexpected guests. And nothing they can do will save their lives.
My entry in the 2023 Cyberpunk Equestria Nightmare Night Contest
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This is a very good one-shot.
I really enjoyed reading the story! I only wished that the punishment that they got would've been explained more. Did they become ghosts, forever to be tormented within the castle walls? Or is there something else going on?
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I wanna know too
Not bad.
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That's one interpretation. I thought it was scarier if I left it ambiguous.
I don't intend to be rude, but this felt not so much like horror as comedic comeuppance. I liked this overall, though, not bad.
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No offense taken.
I'm a sucker for these kinds of died and came back stories, but this feels like everything but horror
Okay we have the Princesses and the Mane 6 as ghosts, but what about the Crystal Mirror to the Human Equestria here Sunset Shimmer was at, wouldn't she have heard of what happened?