SweetieBell falls in love with the new pony at her school, However, this new pony harbors a deep secret, a secret nopony knows except ponies from his old home.
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Too intimidating. It's hard for skimp readers to read such walls of texts, and might frighten away casual readers too.
In the future, you should made change to make each paragraphs smaller, like this.
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not necessarily. I saw 15 long sentences in roleplaying... so I'm pretty much used to 8 to 10+ lines... Although you are correct it is easier... As long it's less than 15 long sentences. it should be fine...
And some people don't use double spacing... which tends to scroll down further. most people do it by just line by line... It also depends who taught you or who the english teacher was... mine english teacher said it must have at least 15 to 20 sentences long before starting a new paragraph... but how ever this is the internet I read first before I write to see what is liked and what isn't...
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