TSecrets of the school

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Drama

SweetieBell falls in love with the new pony at her school, but this new pony harbors a deep secret

• Violence
• Death
• Scootaloo
• Sweetie Belle
• Cheerilee

Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 7.9k words  ·  10  5 · 287 views

Review: Secrets of the School

Tags: Violence, Death, Romance, Drama

Summary: The title is not a mystery fiction. A secret that no pony knows… In the long description Hmmm, mystery am I, right? (If that is true then how come this isn’t a mystery story???)

Review:  This is the author's best literature that I have read so far, I must admit.  But in my opinion, a mystery tag is still necessary.  For me, this receives an 8/10. This is fantastic, as is the method used.  It's an intriguing tale.  The grammar looks like it's highly improved from the past fiction you sent me... and the Idea has also improved as well...