• Published 17th Apr 2023
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Rainbow Factory But Horny - Pillowfight



Meteor Gleam's coltfriend just got a job at the Cloudsdale Weather Factory, and it's totally killed their sex life. Maybe she should investigate. She won't like what she finds...

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A lewdly wholesome story, and funny, too!

I think people are being a little too harsh.

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I think they did not even read the story just saw the non-con tag.

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I'm not entirely sure they're even people at this point; rigging up a botnet for this would be trivial.

It took me an embarrassingly long time to figure out who Cakebitch was.

This was adorable. Enjoyed it a lot.

Fever dream high in the quiet of the night
You know that I caught it
Bad, bad boy
Shiny toy with a price
You know that I bought it

Killing me slow, out the window
I'm always waiting for you to be waiting below
Devils roll the dice, angels roll their eyes
What doesn't kill me makes me want you more

And it's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa oh
It's a cruel summer
With you

Hang your head low
In the glow of the vending machine
I'm not dying
You say that we'll just screw it up in these trying times
We're not trying

So cut the headlights, summer's a knife
I'm always waiting for you just to cut to the bone
Devils roll the dice, angels roll their eyes
And if I bleed, you'll be the last to know

Oh, it's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
With you

I'm drunk in the back of the car
And I cried like a baby coming home from the bar (oh)
Said, "I'm fine, " but it wasn't true
I don't wanna keep secrets just to keep you
And I snuck in through the garden gate
Every night that summer just to seal my fate (oh)
And I screamed for whatever it's worth
"I love you, " ain't that the worst thing you ever heard?
He looks up grinning like a devil

It's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules, in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
With you

I'm drunk in the back of the car
And I cried like a baby coming home from the bar (oh)
Said, "I'm fine, " but it wasn't true
I don't wanna keep secrets just to keep you
And I snuck in through the garden gate
Every night that summer just to seal my fate (oh)
And I screamed for whatever it's worth
"I love you, " ain't that the worst thing you ever heard?

Incredibly disappointed we had to wait until the fandom was basically dead before we got this because it would have done serious numbers in like 2014.

An hour into the most disappointing bondage session of Meteor Gleam’s life

Don't worry, the session isn't over yet!
At least the stallions are having fun though.

“Wait a minute... Dr. Atmosphere invented a goo that makes stallions keep it up forever, and this is what he did with it?”

Good point actually.

“Oh, Peri.” Meteor Gleam reached down with a hoof and rubbed her coltfriend’s red nuts as they bounced wildly between his hind legs. “My big dumb cuddly featherbrain. What am I going to do with you?”
Perihelion gave a handsome smile. “Marry me?”
Meteor’s heart skipped another beat, but this time she was in control. “Whoa, there, pony. Don’t you think you’re moving a little fast?”
“I’m a pegasus. We move fast.”

There are no faults in that logic!


Great story!
I enjoyed reading it.
Not only the plot itself, but also the implementation!


This story doesn't deserve that many downvotes. Most likely from people who just read the tags and made their opinion.

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