A Good Breakup

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Krystal Clearskies

Krystal Clearskies #1 · Aug 17th, 2020 · 3 · ·

I'm not stifling your creativity, i can see thru how well written and fleshed out this story is that you put a lot of love and care into this story. I just...i only accept snuff fics when the character has it coming. Ivory is such a sweet mare it just horribly rubs me the wrong way. Maybe that was your intention. If so, great work. I'm not gonna dislike the story because i don't want to stifle your creativity but...poor Ivory.

FortuneWriter

FortuneWriter #2 · Aug 17th, 2020 · · ·

Ivory didn't deserve that. Doesn't particularly matter though; she still got it.

Good story, I enjoyed it.

RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #3 · Aug 17th, 2020 · · ·

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Ugh, total turn-off. How could you?! :p

Okay, really well-written. Excellent and I loved it.

Sinful Gold

Sinful Gold #4 · Aug 18th, 2020 · · ·

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Always happy to please!

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Hey, I totally get that. You might prefer my other snuff story, Logical Leap and the Murder of Maids, which spends a lot of time setting up the corruption of the victim and painting her as a villain of her own first. For this one, however, I think the commissioner specifically enjoyed the idea of betraying a completely innocent mare. To each their own!

Mr Replay