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You used the word fur to describe a goose. I suggest replacing with "plumage"
Just the concept reminds me of "leda and the swan" I hate that story. So one day I will give this story a try one day but it might be a while.
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I apologize. It was written on a mobile device so editing was almost impossible.
A pony gets overpowered by an ordinary goose? I know ponies are bad at fighting in general, (just see any episode for proof of that) but that's just sad.
Also, geese my not have teeth, but I would not recommend a blow job from one. Just look up a picture of goose "teeth"
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I happen to own a flock of geese along with a turkey. I know that they have a kind of serrated beak, which is why this is such a stupid and amusing story.
Okay.... Was Zeus looking to try men for a bit?
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Maybe. Originally this was going to be a dark comedy based off Untitled goose game, but with the goose stealing body parts in a gory fashion because geese be angry .
This was pretty funny 8/10 would read again!
Not sure the non-con, fetish and profanity tags are 100% necessary though.
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I think fucking a goose counts as a fetish, as for non-con and the rest, it's better to be on the safe side then end up pissing people off, as with all my works.
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I guess you have a point, my bad
nitpick she is very faintly pinkish, while ivory tends toward yellow.
pastel
recent memory
hm this seems a bit strange...
remove
I think you want ivory
shift
gambeson
standing
steadied
tourists [maybe?]
literally
feathers
repetition
thought
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Thank you. I rushed this out on mobile and I'm leaving it as is because it was a cool experiment to see how good I was able to write on a mobile device.
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well bruh she kinda looks like a goose