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6-D Pegasus


Me or my OC?

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This story is a sequel to Twilight Finds A Brick In Her Shower


Twilight's bedside lamp ends up on the ground. Way more times than it should.







Yes. It was me, Barry. I went back in time to make your cover art so awful, no one would ever want to read it!

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Comments ( 10 )

Very nice! I like the part where Twilight Finds Her Lamp on the Ground.

I feel bad for Twilight.
You sure wrote them well :moustache::twilightoops:

Will Rarity suffer a similar fate?
:rainbowdetermined2::raritydespair:

Dash.

Ah Ahhh.

She'll steall all your luminairs.

:pinkiecrazy:

Spike looked away, a distant look in his eyes. "Two days ago, Sweetie and I slipped out with some magazines our older caretakers have been hiding from us. We saw... such terrible things there, Dash... didn't sleep at all that night... one sleepless night for another sleepless night..."

:rainbowhuh:... So you're torturing Twilight for your own bad decisions?
:moustache: Well when you put it that way. You make us sound like villains.
:rainbowwild: Glad we're on the same page then, Spike.

Invisible-O strikes again!

This was AWESOME, hahahaa. I loved your narration, props to you big time! :pinkiehappy:

Twilight rolled his eyes

Just a little error I caught, you might want to fix it.

Other than that, this was a very entertaining read, just like the last one.

In the story, the lamp is metal, but in the cover art, the lamp is wooden.

This is unacceptable.

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