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Dragoknight92

Dragoknight92 #1 · Oct 7th, 2022 · 3 · ·

Wow, AJ looks beautiful.

Flora Blossom

Flora Blossom #2 · Oct 7th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Honesty best policy! The honest truth... Hot fiction!

Alzrius

Alzrius #3 · Oct 7th, 2022 · 3 · ·

Those interested in the full version of the cover image should check out 1694946 on Derpi. For the NSFW version, check out 1694951.

There is always a hope

There is always a hope #4 · Oct 7th, 2022 · 1 · 2 ·

Glamour had a beaming smile on her face as she reached her hand out, "Hi there, Jackie. In case you didn't know, I'm Glamour Star. It's a pleasure to meet you!"

I maked a stickman named Jackie, but he is a boy.

Herald of Opera

Herald of Opera #5 · Oct 7th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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It honestly sounds more like a girl's name to me, but the most famous Jackie is male so it's de facto unisex. If you insult him, it'll be for his politics and not his name.

NecromanCREEEEEE

NecromanCREEEEEE #6 · Oct 8th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Jack can be nick named to Jackie, but Jacqueline can also be shortened to Jack or Jackie.

Moral of the story, people just name their kids whatever they want, damn the consequences.

There is always a hope

There is always a hope #7 · Oct 9th, 2022 · · ·

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You're right pal.

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #8 · Oct 9th, 2022 · · ·

Long winded.

Red_Velvet_Skye

Red_Velvet_Skye #9 · Oct 9th, 2022 · · ·

Aw I was Hoping to See jackie Broken and turned into a bimbo. Sigh

happytime27

happytime27 #10 · Oct 11th, 2022 · 1 · ·

did not even realize you were the same guy who wrote the Dino story, this story was great to bud! Keep up the awesome work!

Treforce

Treforce #11 · Oct 23rd, 2022 · 1 · ·

Seing as the magic body control is very much to my liking, this goes to my favorite folder.
I know this is a 1 shot thing, but I hope to see more of this in the future =^_^=

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