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Mocha Star
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But I would try to burn all the houses at once I seen that movie keep the story going
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Thanks for reading.
I am going for a pony version of the story with pony reactions and interactions. They differ from what humans would do.
I am enjoying the weird setting, always a fan of those displace lab social experiments that we saw in the Twilight Zone, The outer Limits and star Trek. I wonder if they will be bent and twisted into the role of 1950's suburban family couple with the plastic artificial allow feel to them. Looking forward to see more or this.
I would have killed that freaking thing by now if I was in their shoes
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I think we all would have.
Lol
The colt is definitely design to create frictions with the couple and is a tool to whatever created this place and is enjoying getting a reaction from them, but is not outright hostile to them, for the moment, just deliberately creepy, through that could change, and we don't know if the colt is an actually pony that is puppeteered by something or is some sort of child with god like powers. I think it would have been better to ask the colt why they are here and what he wants from them, and what is it's end goal. The colt probably doesn't actually know anything, but is their only line of communication. Through I wouldn't let my guard down around the colt, I think it would be best not to give him anything that could feed/encourage him to harass them, to be angry at him. Through I would be worried that once the colt's become s a full adult he will easily over power them and could rape Gama for him to 'experiment' on in his completely psychopathic reasoning that he has. I wonder if treating the colt in a neutral/semi-polite manner it could have avoided the colt developing even worst antisocial behaviors.
A fun game you say... hello blue blood I want to play a game you don't know me but I know you. you treat Ponies as if they're slaves because you're a unicorn and Princess celeste's nephew but now you play a game for your life that device around your head it will go off killing you think of it as Universe bear trap or you can chop off your horn with that hacksaw live or die the choice is yours
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I was thinking Squid Game.
AYO! this is good dude, that fact that it was inspired by a movie that I think was very overlooked and underrated is great, loved this so much, not enough stories about this kind of surrealism are on fimfic
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Thanks! I loved the movie but couldn't just copy it to FiM so I wrote it like this. It means a lot that you read this.
Also the end I kinda made up as I went. Lol
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Yeah I don't know about the ending tho, the only part that I didn't really like. Because as I read I assumed they were gonna start having more and more kids, and it was supposed to be a metaphor to them about how scared they are in having to care for children, due to the husband being very "Horny" I thought I knew where it was going, still very good.
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Thanks. Like I said, I didn't know where to take it so I just let it ride. Your idea makes more sense though. Hind sight.
Check out Imperfect Stasis if you like sci-fi based on movies.
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Will do! whats the movie its inspired by?
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Passengers.
It's so good even I read it a few months after posting it.