• Published 30th Aug 2022
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Vivarium - Mocha Star



A couple looking for a dream house ends up trapped alone in a housing community.

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A fun game you say... hello blue blood I want to play a game you don't know me but I know you. you treat Ponies as if they're slaves because you're a unicorn and Princess celeste's nephew but now you play a game for your life that device around your head it will go off killing you think of it as Universe bear trap or you can chop off your horn with that hacksaw live or die the choice is yours

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I was thinking Squid Game.

AYO! this is good dude, that fact that it was inspired by a movie that I think was very overlooked and underrated is great, loved this so much, not enough stories about this kind of surrealism are on fimfic

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Thanks! I loved the movie but couldn't just copy it to FiM so I wrote it like this. It means a lot that you read this.
Also the end I kinda made up as I went. Lol

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Yeah I don't know about the ending tho, the only part that I didn't really like. Because as I read I assumed they were gonna start having more and more kids, and it was supposed to be a metaphor to them about how scared they are in having to care for children, due to the husband being very "Horny" I thought I knew where it was going, still very good.

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Thanks. Like I said, I didn't know where to take it so I just let it ride. Your idea makes more sense though. Hind sight.
Check out Imperfect Stasis if you like sci-fi based on movies.

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Will do! whats the movie its inspired by?

11527755
Passengers.
It's so good even I read it a few months after posting it.

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