Please do a part 2

That was really cute. I'm so bad with rhymes, so I avoid them most of the time.

You did a fine job on the rhymes. Great job!

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I am considering it.

I ship it

This was amazing, solid ten out a ten, loved the characters and the rhyming was spot on. Thumbs up and favorite!

This is adorable, hilarious, and yet hot. Well done.

"Honestly fucking beautiful"

good story... and cute

Nice to see another Macora fanfic

I hoped I didn’t sound possessive or old-fashioned. I know folks get pretty persnickety about those things.

Yes, you do sound very old fashioned, and it is very charming.

I placed my forehoof on her shoulder, and sexily reassured her by saying, “Ah’ve never done this before.”

This was very amazing and heartfelt.

Mac is really adorable in this one.

Also, Zecora takes advantage of her patient.
- I can't stop talking!
🐴 - Don't mind if I do! Tell me more!

It excited me. I wanted to try harder. I ran my tongue along the rubbery, smooth opening and found a large bulb protruding out. I licked it and watched her body jolt in delight. She started to leak onto the bed sheets. I felt like I found a new toy. Each time I licked that bulge her body jerked. I wanted to see what would happen if I sucked on it.

Oo, yeah, uhm going straight for it is a bad idea. Don't think of such a sensitive area as a sweet spot— it definitely is, but, metaphorically speaking it would've felt better for her if they took things slow. Imagine a loading bar. Doing that shoots it all the way up to 100%. It feels good but inching towards it feels even better.
Twas their first time, it makes sense though, and he quickly fixed things soon after. why am I giving sex tips here. how'd I get here. omg