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AuroraDawn


haha rainbow machine go brrr

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Very like. Much love.

Sequel would be nice.

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If the muses grace me yet again, there’ll be one.

I'm gay but the way that you write girls with dicks is incredibly appealing!

Welp G5 hot fic.

So all the girls have both a penis and a pussy right?

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Sunny has a cock and balls and no pussy, the other mares are all standard issue

You write Dom Zipp so well.

Very fun, and yeah if you can find that follow up very interested

Oh yeah. Now that’s the stuff!

Particularly liked the ‘medium sneaky’ buildup. And then really finishing it off on the table, just perfect! Could have done without the analingus at the end, but that’s just my personal preference.

I really need to see that sequel, though. Complete with the awkwardness of Zipp making lame excuses for why she needs to sleep over with the lovebirds instead of going home. And then, once they’re alone, Zipp starts on the premise that she’s only going to watch and tell them exactly what to do — not cheating, and she’s already seen it once, so what’s the big deal? But then, as things go on, Zipp gradually gets more involved. Holding a tail out of the way. Pushing a flank. Holding Izzy’s head down. Guiding Sunny’s cock in… And before you know it, she’s actually involved in a proper threesome. End with getting carried away: Zipp eating Izzy’s creampie, while Sunny nuts inside Zipp. And then, at the end, they realize what they just did. Zipp says don’t worry — it’s probably a safe time of the month for her.

Heh, I may have gotten a little carried away writing your sequel for you. But maybe it will help re-inspire the sequel idea for you… ^.^

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