Cherished

Sweetie Belle's outstanding performance in the school pageant should be a reason to celebrate, but when she is crushed by a glaring absence in the crowd, Rarity steps up—just like she's always had to do.

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silverMEGAlicorn

silverMEGAlicorn #1 · Feb 5th, 2022 · 3 · ·

And yet their parents will make it a point to attend a grandiose Hearths Warming Eve party once a year, only because of Twilight having it at the castle

This makes an insane amount of sense

Slykz

Slykz #2 · Feb 5th, 2022 · 3 · ·

Gyro Pony

Gyro Pony #3 · Feb 5th, 2022 · 4 · ·

Beautiful.
It’s never too late in FiM’s lifetime for stories like these.

new55

new55 #4 · Feb 5th, 2022 · 3 · ·

Its always nice to find a heartwarming story about Sweetie belle and Rarity.

Thyrrnatf

Thyrrnatf #5 · Feb 5th, 2022 · 5 · ·

what a fantastic story, loves of love and feeling in it.

it kinda reminds me of Simply Rarity .

but a really great story to show Rarity's Genorosity

TheAncientPolitzanian

TheAncientPolitzanian #6 · Feb 5th, 2022 · 3 · ·

I can tell you put a lot of thought and effort into this story's execution, and it paid off and then some. So much so, in fact, that I was actually kinda surprised to discover that this is only the first story you've published on your account; it truly felt like the work of an experienced writer. Kudos!

Congrats on the milestone, and best of luck with all your future endeavors!
:)

Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #7 · Feb 6th, 2022 · 3 · ·

This could work as an actual MLP episode. 10/10

Lover Of Muffins

Lover Of Muffins #8 · Feb 6th, 2022 · 3 · ·

Damn... Some onions have been cut by ninjas

What a pleasure this was to read and I hope, at some point, you do a sequel

Fusion Blaster

Fusion Blaster #9 · Feb 6th, 2022 · 2 · ·

This was a very good well written story.

Just glad it;s only circumstantial evidence their parents are neglectful

MelodyMori

MelodyMori #10 · Feb 8th, 2022 · 1 · ·

I will admit that this made me cry more than I would have particularly liked. While I did not have to take on the responsibility of raising my siblings as Rarity did in this story, to me the biggest gift I got in life was my two siblings. I would never admit it to them of course, as the oldest I am too old for that but still.

Wonderful story, 10/10.

kylesugarman

kylesugarman #11 · Feb 27th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Thanks for the sweet review! I'm actually a professional writer, this is just the first time I've gone through with making an account here and posting an MLP story thanks to some sweet nostalgia. ❤️

Ghost Mike