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It is time for a new day in Equestria.


80-year-old Rarity keeps tripping on the steps.

This story won an honorable mention at the Iron Author Speedwriting Contest at Everfree Northwest. Contestants must write a full pony story within 2 hours, based on a bizarre prompt. This is my story as written for the contest, with only minor proofreading edits. Additional edits may be made once I have received feedback from the judges.

Thank you to all those who hosted the contest, and congratulations to the 1st-3rd place winners.

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Comments ( 4 )

:unsuresweetie: Where's Spike?
:raritystarry: Oh!
:moustache: I'm under the second stare
:facehoof: No wonder you tripped
:ajbemused: He was stuck in the closet
:raritycry: Gabby can't have him , He's my dragon!
:twilightoops: She flew to coup forty years ago
:duck: ...

This was nice.

I was really scared of how it would end. I'm glad it didn't go the way I thought it would.

That aside, this was a wonderful story. As always, I adore the personal, anecdotal touches and the characterisation.

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