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The Second Biggest MLP G5 Apologist



This story is a sequel to Get Him!

A young human called Alex was transported to Equestria without knowing how or why. After being discovered by Twilight Sparkle and her friends, He found himself running for his life as everypony is out to get him.
But after disappearing out of nowhere, Alex finds another "human" in the Everfree Forest and teams up with him to find a way out of this pony world.
But Will They Succeed?

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 25 )

And yet none of them can see that with how they've treated him, they're the actual danger that threatens him.

Hopefully Trixie doesn't drop to the same depths as the rest of the ponies, it would be a shame for her to be no better than them.

Reminds me vaguely of something I saw once, but I can't for the life of me remember where.

I actually based it off of two scenes from different franchises.

1. When Sonic saved Tails from drowning in an archie comic

2. When Carl and Russel first met Dug from Up.

This does bring up the question of how Lachlan is even friends with ponies in the first place, because with how they all reacted to Alex & Andrew it seem more likely they would try and abduct or imprison him for not being a pony so they could do horrible things to him. Though if he were more just somewhat acquainted with them instead of being friends it would make more sense.

And really, at this point I don't think they even CAN be friends with nonponies with how they're acting. If news of all this spread outside Equestria ponykind would end up pariahs.

So that explains why Lachlan is there in the first place. I bet once he finds out celestia is endorsing ponies to hunt the humans down he'll be in for an unpleasant shock. Like, suddenly Celestia is turning evil and endorsing ponies to go do terrible things.

The only part of this chapter that could use some work is the prophecy. It seems too direct in saying exactly what will happen with who.

I hope there could be more ponies to catch them.

I'm thinking about it.

I've been wanting to add characters such as the background characters.

Why does Andrew look weird?

To make him more of a unique human kinda like Mario in Odyssey

I disagree with your creative choice he looks weird. But I do like how it's evolving so far. He seems to act like a normal human being that works with Alex. I'm interested in the story regardless. I'm on chapter 2 now.

Well, if it makes you feel better, I do plan to give Andrew some lore to explain his weird appearence

That would be helpful. If he's different from asked despite being the same kind of humans from earth, it would be very good to know.

He just attacks him? That doesn't make any sense when he was getting mad about them mistreating Lachlan. And Andrew being friends with the ponies still doesn't seem possible, let alone what Celestia wanted.

Is there an official backstory on Lachlan? Because I feel like I'm missing a ton of information

I do plan on expanding the lore to Lachlan in a future story.

I like to think it's because they have the logic of a 'Children's show'.

Andrew instantly bolted towards the castle doors and busted them open and ran out of the ruined castle. But little did he know that something slender would be after him.

SLENDERMAN IN THE STORY CONFIRMED!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!1111????//!??!?!?!

Released just yesterday even tho the story was already put to Complete, LMAO!:rainbowlaugh: anyway this bonus is nice aswell, anyway time to check out the OTHER Sequel aka Alternative Ending Number 11(there were 12 pursuers in the original story btw) it was written by somepony else but this oughta be good:ajsmug:

I'm getting sonic 2 vibes from the thumbnail

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