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Alphamon_Ouryuken

"I am the Aloof Hermit, the Lord of the Empty Seat. I am the Alpha and the Omega"

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Dr Sharaz Jek
Dr Sharaz Jek #1 · January 5th · · 1 ·
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Nice work! Just wish Fluttershy got in on the action more!

Alphamon_Ouryuken
Alphamon_Ouryuken #2 · January 5th · · 1 ·
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11791575

I had originally planned on having her get a lot more involved, but nixed the idea for two reasons:

  1. I felt that took a little away from what was essentially Smolder's first time with the Orthros.
  2. I was on a bit of a time crunch and adding in more scenes for Fluttershy would’ve taken longer.
Thepervertedeye
Thepervertedeye #4 · January 5th · · 1 ·
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I hope crossbreeding is possible

Black--Soul
Black--Soul #5 · January 11th · · 1 ·
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Hot damn, very nice clop :yay:♤♡

TheWraithWriter
TheWraithWriter #6 · February 9th · · ·
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A quite nice story. I have a minor nitpick about the beginning, which seems to pepper in a few shes and hers along with the theys and thems before it's revealed the intruder is Smolder, but as I said it's minor. Also, this one felt a little too safe too me, as in Smolder wasn't doing anything overly dangerous beyond taking a baseball sized knot, but trying to fuck a two headed dog is a bit insane by itself, so I think everything balances out. Overall a preety enjoyable read.

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