Just a guy who likes MLP, and certain characters from the show. I also like having Steve Blum as the voice of King Sombra. I don’t know why; I just do.
After losing a bet to Zipp about something; Sunny and Izzy are being forced to wear diapers for until their punishment is over.
Sunny wasn’t happy about it, and is overall feeling a little gloomy because of it. And because of the fact that she was the one that came up with the bet, and lost.
Luckily for her; Izzy is there beside her to make her feel better. Will she succeed? Or will Sunny be forever gloomy… ?
Only time will tell… .
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Not bad but I feel like there could be more to it. The story was pretty quick.
This sure is funny!
What the fuck
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Probably. Sorry if it was too short
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I hate abuse too
Please stop misusing semicolons.
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XD
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Define misusing… . Because it just something that stops the sentence, but not completely
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Right?
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Yeah.
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Mkay
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A semicolon is used to connect two related thoughts together, and what is on the right hand side of the semicolon should directly connect to what precedes the semicolon. However, they are often used in this story to string together a series of unrelated ideas which should be separated using full stops or commas.
For example;
Sunny whining about her... ahem, 'garments' does not directly connect to the fact they are on the edge of Maretime Bay. Those two ideas should be separated by a full stop.
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Ah… . Mkay then. But then again I’m still kinda new to writing. So yeah… it kinda varies as to what type of signs and punctuations I use. Sorry bout that
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Hey, no worries. We all need to start somewhere.
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True
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That's a lot of deleted comments. What happened there?
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Captain Neckbeard happened. Saying that my story’s bad and so am I. That f**ker.
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Ah.
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Yeah… . Hate people like that
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I find it amazing that diaper stories can get as much hate as gore-rape stories.
That said, this one could use a lot more detail. It's often disappointing to see a good concept fleshed out so little.
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Yeah… sorry…. . I’m still kinda new to writing… . So you know… . Yeah