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Badguy400


Just a guy who likes MLP, and certain characters from the show. I also like having Steve Blum as the voice of King Sombra. I don’t know why; I just do.

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This story will be about King Sombra and Flurry Heart having a weird adventure. How weird? Discord will be involved kind of weird. Cozy Glow is gonna be in this story too, and some of the characters will have a problem with Discord’s highjinks later on in the story; that is all. Oh, and supposedly Chrysalis will offer to help them as well; for a price.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 4 )

I only read the prologue, but it is so messy that I personally don't want to read further
despite the fact that the idea of ​​the story could be interesting

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But it is though. And the only reason that it’s messy is because it’s just a prologue. It’s not the actual beginning of the story after all... just some context on what to expect. Also, you should definitely read my story; if you want to of course.

Well, reading all the way here is clearly alright. But the depth needs to be a bit more... sure the sun rise in that one chapter that is called atmosphere.... weather needs more into this story.

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Okay, got it then. I’ll be sure to fix that as soon as I can.

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