• Member Since 6th Sep, 2020
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Badguy400


Just a guy who likes MLP, and certain characters from the show. I also like having Steve Blum as the voice of King Sombra. I don’t know why; I just do.

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Sweetie Belle’s got a little injury, and it’s starting to bug her. So much so to the point that it’s starting to hurt. With no other options she ran to her big sister’s boutique, and asked for assistance.

Considering her limited knowledge of medical care, will her big sister be able to help out??? Or will it turn into something worse???

Stay tuned to find out.

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Eldorado
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You need to indent a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. You cannot have dialogue from two different characters in the same paragraph.

Unfortunately your story isn't readable in this state, so I've revoked it until the changes are made.

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Okay then. Thanks for the advice

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