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the koopanater


nerd, gamer, and a proud brony

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One day, in the magical world of Equestria, a human teenager named Xavier wakes up to find himself in a strange new world with no recollection of how he even got here in the first place. Was it an accident, on purpose, or fate that brought him here, questions are always on the rise, so Xavier, alongside his new equine friends, will learn more about friendship, get into trouble, and discover new answers, mysteries, and friends.

This fan fiction was inspired by MaxTV1234's story, "Ren's adventures" I would recomend looking at it, it's good

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Comments ( 152 )

Now where the "gear" was, a long blade about the length of Xavier's arm was extended, giving the image of a katana.

Make me faceclaw too much. :facehoof:

Great God i love this story!!!

Keep it up!!!

awwww, I love the ending.

Keep up the work!

I like how snips and snails got a punishment for their actions. Considering that was the worst part of the episode. Considering the woods at night are no place for a child who has little to no experience in the woods. And they certainly shouldn't wake a giant bear up.

Good chapter, was quite enjoyable and it was interesting to learn of Xavier's weakness and how he affected the parasite event.

great chapter, missed ya buddy!
keep it up!

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Thank you my friend, you make my happy to know that someone enjoys my story

I saw blue eyes and immediately thought changeling spy

Wonderful chapter, keep up the great work. :twilightsmile:

Is there a part where Xavier becomes a pony?

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Not that I have planned, so sorry to disappoint.

Awesome chapter, keep up the great work. :twilightsmile:

Wonderful chapter, i have a feeling Xavier has a crush on jasmine

Unless she’s to young for him then, i will wait for the next chapter.

Keep up the great work. :twilightsmile:

This fan fiction was inspired by MaxTV1234's story, "Ren's adventures" I would recomend looking at it, it's good

Can I please have a link, then?

Awesome chapter, I like it a lot. :twilightsmile:

I always felt like twilight was insensitive during this episode. And for a night assistant shouldn't the owl not be working during the day. Plus the owl put spike in danger which could been avoided if he had moved spike first before grabbing the book from the stack he was standing on. Twilight scolded spike for being endangered even though it wasn't his fault. Plus her getting upset about the books was an overreaction because she has a fire breathing dragon in a place that screams fire hazard.

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Sometimes I don’t get her way of thinking.

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You're not the only sometimes her empathy was really lacking. Empathy isn't just about being kind to those in need its also putting yourself in other's shoes even if they aren't openly saying something is wrong. They were plenty of times when she needed to show it to rainbow and didn't even notice. She only noticed other's feelings when they actually said it.

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Honestly, I question it sometimes too. Some things in the show make no sense at times, but we still like the show.

awesome chapter, I'm worried for the humans though.

"Erm, so do random songs randomly break out like this?" Cali asked.

"Er, more or less." Xavier admitted. "I don't actually know why, but I sort of just accept it."

"How? It's like we're on a kids show with these random musical numbers."

Careful there Cali, you broke 3 of the 4 walls there.

Edit:I made it pink in celebration.

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Congratulations, you managed to get a good laugh out of me

You take care of yourself buddy. Keep up the great work. :twilightsmile:

so are you going to go from session 1 to 9 as there are not that many story's that do this out there?

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Bro, my mind literally runs 24/7. I have not only thought of multiple ways for many episodes across the series, but I was also thinking of ways to implement some of the comics. This is my goal, to finish the series
I'm honestly glad someone asked

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ok is your mind a nuclear reactor or something:pinkiecrazy:

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Try earth's inner layer if it was a thermal reactor
I am hopped up on V8 energy drinks 24/7

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cutting a bit close to the core don't you think:facehoof:

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I'm honestly curious how'd you handle Equestria Girls or the movie. (If you plan on doing them, that is)

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That's honestly a pretty hard one to do for me to the point of it having a good chance of not being included. I might try to find a way to get Sunset into the story, but don't expect anything about the EQ girls

Personally I always thought this was a mean thing. Luna is probably having a hard time fitting in and just when she starts to make friends pinkie ruins it.

You renamed this story and I didn't recognize it right away

Yes sweetie messed up by touching rarity stuff but she also meant well and rarity should have been mature enough to explain why she was upset. Considering sweetie was trying to help and everything that rarity hated at first ended up being great afterwards and rarity doesn't get the right to act like her sister is her servant. She is supposed to a combination of mom and friend not that she was going for either with her sister. Makes me wonder when the last time she spent time with her family was?

"What is happening here?"

YOU ARE BECOMING AN ELEMENT

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Do you need help to complete these faster?

"This here is Winnona." Applejack answered. "She's the family's pet."

im a dog fan

"Sweet, I'm starved." Alex said as he walked up to the group. Now that Alex is joining the group, their team has grown. Who knows what the athlete will bring, but he will sure to be someone who helps brings them even closer.

another human


Just how many more are out there?

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Nah, I got this. Thanks for the concern though

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