Ren Loodan, a 15 year old child, mysteriously awakens in a chamber, he exits out of the chamber and finds out he's in an apartment complex, or so he thought. Once he escapes the place, he finds out the apartment complex is actually a spacheship, which seems it hasn't been used for a long time. He suddenly finds himself in Equestria, where he meets Twilight Sparkle and her friends. Ren will journey with them to learn about the Magic of Friendship and learn about his past on how he got to Equestria and why can't he remember why he was in that spaceship or sleeping inside of that chamber in order to find a way home back to his family. Now equipped with his Hacking Gun, he'll fight the forces of evil that threatens Equestria in order to protect his new friends and find the true meaning to Hope and Friendship, but he isn't the only human that's in Equestria.
How can a gun hack something?
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I thought it would be a good idea, the Hacking Gun can destroy, control, and move mechanisms, and I added the part where it can also affect living organisms, The Hacking Gun's history will be revealed in later chapters
Not bad start. Can't wait for more.
Pretty cool. Love the moment between Ren and Celestia.
I love the warm and friendly welcome they gave Ren.
When I hear the name "Ren," my mind immediately goes to one of two places:
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I know, I couldn't think of better names, besides he isn't like those pictures you gave me, he's an optimistic average kid like Makoto Naegi from Danganronpa
Awesome!
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Thank you, so do you like the story?
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thank you
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Yes
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No prob. This is getting good.
I love the hacking gun. It's so cool. Do you have a image of what it looks like?
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Sure, here what it looks like:
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Very cool looking.
First off. That is cool. I love the Mystery Dungeon games and Manga. DBZ is cool too
Now these made me giggle for a bit. It's something I didn't expect Applejack say.
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I know I love the Mystery Dungeon games, the central mystery on the protagonist memories, it's kinda similar on the situation Ren is in.
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That is one of the good points. When the hero looses their memory it give you a chance to put some of your thoughts and mind into them. Explorers of the Sky is my absolute favorite.
Cool chapter. It's sad to hear that Ren was taken advantage of when he was young. But glad he learned over time.
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Thanks Knives, Ren is the kind of person who would never give up and will encourage people to keep moving forward with hopes in their hearts.
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I like that. It's the typical good guy motto. But it is still a good thing.
Awesome!
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Thanks!
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Yes
god damn cliffhangers good story
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Thanks, its a very good item Ren will use sometimes during his adventures around Equestria.
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sounds interesting can't wait to read the next chapter
Awesome!
Love the chapter. But I can't see that picture of the Hover board
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Really? I put it up on the author's note. Strange
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To me it's not that big of a deal just thought I let you know.
It is so cute I could just die... *falls over dead.*
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Thanks, I thought he would make a good partner for Ren. I mean, I've seen Adventure Time with Jake The Dog as Finn's best friend, so I thought maybe I should give it a try, well except the magic part, but you get the gist. Besides, he'll get bigger sometime later in the story.
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Nice. Can't wait for that.
i imagen the dog sounds like the dog in the book delvers llc book 3
Awesome
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Thanks
Awesome stuff. I love this chapter.
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Aw thanks Knives...say, do you know how to make cover art? I'm trying to find a website to make cover art for my story, but I just can't seem to find one. Think you know somewhere I could make one?
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Sorry pal. But I don't know. You can try to commission someone to make you some cover art. Deviantart is a good place to start. I wish I could help you more.
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Okay thanks
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No prob
Awesome
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Ahh thanks, though, sorry about this chapter being so short
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Is all right
Nice chapter. This warmed my heart.
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Thanks, it's just very nice for Ren to think of Twilight and the others as family
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Yup. Give me the warm fuzzies~
I don't mind that. It makes sense. Loved the chapter
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Thanks Knives, anyway, the next chapter is gonna be "Call of the Cutie"! Just to let you know