Lukas Hart was just an ordinary teenager who lived in California with his family and friends, intill one day something happened that changed his life forever, he was struck by lightning and was sent to someplace where an adventure of a lifetime is waiting for him, Join Lukas as he travels across Equestria with his friends Sunny and Izzy were they make new friends, see new places, and bring unity back to Equestria again.
This story is inspired by Lukas: A New Generation A.K.A By MyAwesomePony (All Right Reserved)
(Benjo's Comix INC. Productions.)
(MLP belongs to Hasbro)
Enjoy!
I'm already hooked and looking towards the next chapter of how Lukas will react when he realizes it wasn't a dream.. LOL
Well I guess you can say he's not in Kansas anymore
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LOL!!!
That is wonderful thanks for sharing. My THDHR
Te has ganado mi like, buen dice, me encanta, creo que si la subes en wattpad ganes más xd.
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Gracias amigo!
wonderful chapter, hope to see more.
Good story so far, I never thought someone would take inspiration from me
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Well, it's a good thing you got a big fan!
And friend...
If that's ok with you?
Excellent chapter, I do hope we get to see how Izzy's reaction to meeting a human will go and I'm already visualizing of how Hitch and the other residents of Maretime bay will react to meeting Lukas will be. xD
Love it, can’t wait for more.
Fantastic job, keep it up as I can't wait to see what happens next.
Have you finished working on the new chapter yet?
can't wait for the new chapter my g
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Not yet but I'll be finishing it soon.
'I'm sure I'll be fine, I mean what's the worst that could happen?'' Lukas said. And those were his famous last words
This was difficult to read. On a technical level this chapter was really messy. You have multiple characters speaking within the same paragraph, often making it difficult to tell who is speaking at any given moment. Your writing also has mountains of comma splices (commas being used to join bits of sentences which should be separated by full stops), and there were several tense swaps (pick a tense and stick with it). Example:
This should look like this:
This might seem nitpicky, but if the writing and grammar are a mess people are going to be put off.
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Thank you for letting me know, I'll fix it right away!
I'm loving this so far, man! Keep up the good work!😊👍