When sonic ''and friends'' thought they sent Dr. Robotnik to the Mushroom Planet. He was instead sent to the world known as Equestria were he encounters the storm king. He later gets rid of him and takes over his army. Robotnik now with an army he'll find a way back to his world to get revenge on that blue rodent, in the process taking over this world and taking power beyond his wildest dreams! But to do that he'll need the magic of four princesses.
This story was inspired by What If The Shredder Was In MLP: The Movie? A.K.A. by Battwell (All Rights Reserved)
(All the credit goes to Battwell)
(Owner of MLP: The Movie belongs to Hasbro)
(Dr. Robotnik Belongs to SEGA)
Enjoy!
Chapters (3)
Well this looks to be a super awesome Sonic x MLP crossover.
Not a good sign when you don't know the difference between "were" and "where".
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Forgive me but I'm autistic. I'll fix it right away!
Interesting idea for a story. I apologize if my grammar is not the best, English is not my main language.
First of all let me congratulate you on your first story and I also hope you don't mind my opinion at some point. The premise of the story is very interesting, personally I'm not a big fan of Sonic, but I loved Jim Carrey's interpretation as Dr. Robotnik, let me tell you that you manage to represent Dr. Robotnik's attitude very well.
But I must also comment that from my perspective the story is progressing very fast and you are not giving a good development to some characters, there are also interesting interactions between different characters that could be developed a little better, such as the dialogue between Dr. Robotnik and Luna, If I can imagine her reacting that way to his egotistical attitude, another small detail is that Twilight didn't recognize Dr. Robotnik as human and she didn't react when he mentioned the word "humans", that means it's not canon world of Sunset Shimmer or maybe Twilight was too clueless. Finally, I am not one to tell you this, but I just warn you that you should be a little attentive to spelling errors, some will let you know so that you can improve your writing while others will not appreciate the effort it takes you to write each chapter and that we can all make mistakes.
That's all and I hope you continue with your story, good luck.
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Thank you for the Commet and I already edited chapter 1 and 2, also I'm trying my best to improve my written and my favorite actor is indeed Jim Carrie which is why I know very well how his attitude is like, chapter 3 is in the works so if I or You spot any errors, I'll fix them. Thank you!
We’ll need the Sonic from the games to arrive and stop Robuttnik from concurring the planet!
Sonic: Hold it right there Eggman!!
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That'll be in a future story!
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Next chapter when
Wow. I really liked it. I've been a Sonic fan since I was a kid. I've always dreamed of running as fast as that. The crossover is really interesting. I would take it to the movies for a family viewing with my kids. It would be great to see this on well-known viewing platforms like soap2day(https://soap2day-1.com/). Because my children and I have already watched about a hundred children's movies and cartoons and are now looking for something new.
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it's almost done!
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*Cough cough*
Just saying and no hate but uh
You said the next chapter is almost done but it's been 2 weeks
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Your right, it's my fault... I've been so caught up in reading other fanfics that I had forgotten about my own fanfics.
Mostly because I didn't have any ideas, but I'll see what I can do!
Actually, it's Ponyville or a different Pony town/city.
Klugetown is just in the middle of the Badlands. Which is literally far, far away where the Canterlot's Mountain was. Just saying.
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I know... But this is Doctor Robotnik were talking about, he knows that Twilight and her friends couldn't have possibly just head to ponyville. It's too obvious, so far in the bad lands is obviously a place there gonna want to go, to get as far away as possible, not as close as possible. Ya feel me?
yay new chapter
Robotnik feels more like a more developed Storm King. I like this story so far