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TheOneWithoutAName


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Cover image is anthro. If the story isn't, then you should probably clarify that in the description. If the story is, then it should be tagged as such.

I hope that their is some good Boobjobs and Blowjobs in this.

12 dislikes? i hate trolls

Comment posted by Ereiam deleted May 13th, 2021

Not my fetish, but not enough for a thumb's down. I don't understand how some people can be such trolls. This is a well written work and if it wasn't for me not being much of a fan of Cucking than I would probably liked it more. That being said, if you do find this stuff to your taste then you have an enjoyable time with this piece of work.

Perhaps the downvotes were due to foalcon and (possibly) noncon? I haven't actually read it, and those would be things I'd downvote this for if I didn't know they were in it, but given the warnings, I'm just not voting on it since I didn't read it. Not my things, so can't vote.

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No anthro tag, and the content warnings heavily imply that this is because they aren't anthro. That takes boobjobs off the table.

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People like you are the reason those content warnings exist. (Downvoting for the nature of content rather than the quality is still a misuse of the system, mind)

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Damnit!!! That sucks! Especially that I love that picture, and definitely know who leinhart is.

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Exactly. That is why I neither read nor downvoted. It makes it obvious.

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It's probably because there's no feral version of bimbo Yona; for some reason Stygian and Yona don't appear so often in porn.

I personally liked this story; I hope the downvotes don't demotivate you. The ending is certainly different; often it's the mane six that becomes targets. Nice to see someone remembers other characters exist. If the commissioner ever revisits this setting, I hope Stygian starts teaching cock worship and male dominance to the students (and slutify more males).

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I'm honestly not sure what feral bimbo anything would look like. How do you communicate "bimbo" on a species that doesn't have the traditionally needed biology, doesn't usually wear clothes and would look patently ridiculous with any kind of human makeup style?

This is actually a pretty decent ratio for the Porn tag with a canon couple being broken up by a third canon character gone full Ron the Death Eater who completely gets away with it despite the usual implications of that term. All you'd need is brutal death played for laughs or sexy and you've completed the checklist of traits that result in drive-by downvotes.

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Yeah, these days clop stories have an uphill battle votes-wise, but cuckolding stories even more, I think. It's not my kink either. I don't judge according to what's my kink or not, though others most likely do even if that's not really fair to the author.

Hoping for a sequel~! <3

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There is a good example of a feral bimbo in the Notes at the start of the chapter. :pinkiesmile:

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The Young Six are valuable targets for smut, so I felt it necessary to imply they would get fucked up as well. In the best of ways. :trollestia:

The downvotes don't do anything to my motivation. Don't worry. :twilightsmile: I am long enough in the business to weather it. And considering I got 4 Downvotes within the first few minutes (which is obviously not enough time to even read a quarter of the clopfic) it was clear for me how badly some people would jump at the bit to downvote this story and bury it under said downvotes. This is a classical case of haters gonna hate.

This doesn't mean that I don't take criticism of course. It is just that in this case, looking through the comments, I don't see anyone complaining about the quality of the story, so it seems obvious to me that this isn't the problem.

And I had fun with this. It is nice writing Young 6 smut and if only a handful of people enjoy it, it means I still entertained quite a few people, so it was worth it. :yay: So, I am glad you are one of the few that enjoyed it! :pinkiesmile:

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The link to the picture is now gone! :derpyderp1:

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Weeeell... you could be a little more consistent with embedding the names when characters address one another. :trollestia: You did a lot of the times, but sometimes you didn't. Like here:

“What is it Yona? Something wrong with the script?”

“I am cumming Yona! Take my cum up your ass like a proper slut!” he growled around her ear, biting and pulling on it more.

“Sorry for the wait Yona. I just had to give your boyfriend’s muzzle a test ride.

“Yes Yona. I will breed you.

Just a few examples!

Shame this wasn't Anthro and based on the title pic (sexiest version of Yona btw). That being said this is the best Yona clop fic I've seen to date, and that's not just cause Bimbo Yona is the best thing ever.

This needs a non-con tag.

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Why? Technically, Yona never really screams no at him. He always manages to convince her. The bimbofication spell isn't a mind-altering one either. :rainbowhuh:

Truth be told, he has nailed several mares in his class already. And this particular yak would be his newest conquest.

There are a handful of tense issues in the story. Has, for instance, should be 'had'.

"Teacher pony why not smash Sandbar?"

Maybe he can even visit his old student Cozy Glow to reform her or the other friends of Yona

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To be fair, she certainly didn't consent to being bimbofied (and the whole "you are now super horny and only I can bring you the pleasure you want, no-one else" thingie, I'm unsure if these two were separate)

While hugging her, his horn had continued to glow, hitting her with a spell on her head.

It would make her more perceptible to whatever he had to say, as well as increasing her libido massively over time and change her body in that of a proper bimbo slut.

, which made her not be satisfied by Sandbar anymore, not the mention the whole teacher-student and writer-fan power relationships...

If the sole reason she ended up having sex with Stygian is because of mind-altering she never consented to or even knew about (which it was/she didn't) , I'd agree with a non-con tag, or at least a dub-con, if both aren't already covered under the bimbo tag.

It'd be cool to see a sequel to this

It would make her more perceptible to whatever he had to say, as well as increasing her libido massively over time and change her body in that of a proper bimbo slut.

You probably mean "receptive" and "into"

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The site rules are stricter on underage human or anthro porn.

I think that's because the law is stricter on those subjects.

Could be fun to see a sequel. Perhaps making Sandbar a sissy cuck for Stigians use for that one?

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