This story is a sequel to Stranded in the land of the two cruel queens
After being returned to the proper timeline, Twilight Sparkle, her mind and soul became corrupted by the combination of the curse placed on her by Daybreaker and the tantabus implanted in her mind by Nightmare Moon, becoming something dark and twisted.
That same night screams of horrified mares echo across the land as they find their foals stolen by a dark alicorn.
Heeding the call of her former teacher, Sunset Shimmer, along with her six friends come to the land of Equestria to save the fallen princess.
Can the Humane seven, along with the remaining Mane Six, Starlight Glimmer and Princesses Celestia, Luna and Cadance save Princess Twilight or will a new dark queen rise to rule?
EDIT: Due to the limit of 5 main characters/character groups able to be tagged, Starlight Glimmer is also a main character.
You have my interest. X3
Fall should be capitalized.
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Could you show me which sentence it is in so I can fix it?
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In the title
Technically, it's Starlight's FAULT for screwing with the timeline. And cause Twilight to be tortured and corrupted by those alternate dark queens.
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Ah, thanks.
Managed to start reading this. Its getting pretty crazy.
Though it really bothers me Sci-Twi didn't bring her Spike with her. Why didn't she bring him with her? Is it already she starts to "toss" him aside now she has actual friends?
Its just really disappointing human-world Spike got excluded hard and any chance of being included is gone due to the portal is now destroyed.
It just doesn't seem fair that the Mane 6 gets to meet their human counterparts but Spike doesn't for his.
Speaking of which, where's Equestrian Spike during this?
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It's a spoiler to the previous story I guess.
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I read the previous story though.
Just recently finished reading it too.
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In all honesty, just like with the writers of the show, I forgot all about him.
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It's ambiguous, but Spike's fate is in the first chapter.
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He literally just got back after Twilight and Starlight managed to get back though.
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Well that.. is really disappointing..
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I guess I forgot, maybe I need to reread it.
Liked seeing how Spike is doing and such. Would more be touched on him about what has happened and the whole time thing as well?
Though still disappointing the human Mane 7 left human-world Spike like that..
The fight scene the Royal Sisters are in was pretty good, was worried this would end up being they get taken out and once again needing someone to save them.
Sci-Twi might want to worry too that her Spike might be furious at her for leaving him behind like that.
Like I said its like she's already tossing him aside since she has actual friends now.
Honestly even if they were rushing, Sci-Twi shouldn't have forgotten about human-world Spike like that.
In fact it shows the damage is worse that due to Sci-Twi has actual friends now, human-world Spike is more "forgettable" now.
I still feel like human-world Spike would be really pissed at Sci-Twi for not only not bringing him but also the fact she forgotten about him like that. Even if the girls were rushing to Equestria, human-world Spike is Sci-Twi's closest thing to a friend and shouldn't been forgotten like that. But since she did, it just shows human-world Spike is just not "needed" anymore due to she has actual friends and thus not even bother to remember about human-world Spike.
Though I find it pretty hilarious with Princess Luna messing around with that ink-pen and even wrote on Celestia's face like that.
So... Light sabers, sonic, cthulhthu and a Toyota joke all cramed in this story alongside with some poking at sibling rivalry and OG mlp.
I'd say this is a complete win! Great chapter btw.
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Thanks.
It was cool in seeing more lore from the sisters past.
Though its really disappointing Spike missed out on the lore and meeting Harmony there.
In fact why didn't the tree call on him too? It just feels so wrong since he's Twilight's little brother who has been with her side. And the fact him not being by her side is where she got infected by the Nightmare. Why did he get excluded so hard?
Is this story dead ?
I waiting for update really hard.
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No, I just haven't gotten around to writing the next chapter.
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Thank you for reassuring me.
I know what it's like to have trouble writing (even if I don't have the level to write other than in French), but as you published a lot of other text since the last chapter...
Well, I totally understand.
The new chapter is great, I've been looking forward to it for a long time
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Thanks.
Its cool seeing that the story is continuing.
And the lore was really cool.
But why did Spike had to miss out on all of that?
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Spike will play a role.
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What about what he just missed out though?
It seems like destiny is giving him and his human-world counterpart the short end of the stick.
This is on of my favorite story here on FimFiction, it must be popular... Wait, WHAT ?! Only 130 views and 23 positive review ?!
By the way, how is it possible that I passed near two month before reading this oh so long-awaited chapter ?
Ho, well...