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just wanted to point out you have written "sunset" in a few places instead of what I assume you meant to say "starlight"
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Thank you, I'll fix that.
I think they had the guards violate you
Wait, what?
What do you think, you self-centered bitch?
Yeah, that idea is overkill.
You're only sorry because the consequences of your actions are finally catching up to you, not because you feel remorse for what you've done.
Well Starlight, being sent to hellish alternate timelines can take a toll on someone especially when in the timeline you're currently stuck, you're being tortured. So please for the love of all, shut up.
You're not sorry, stop pretending to be so.
I have a funny feeling that its cadence.
Sunset should be Starlight.
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Thank you. Fixed it.
A interesting story to see I say.
Though.. really disappointed that Spike basically got erased just like that and that would be it for him...
I wonder how Twilight reacts/act at the fact her number one assistant(and little brother pretty much) was erased.
It was bad enough he just got erased like that, but it being brushed aside would make it worse honestly..
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Because not only because Twilight got launched through the side of the time tunnel, but also because of the odd rebound that the spell did onto Starlight, Spike wasn't able to cross into that timeline.
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Still really disappointing that's just it for him though. Just erased there..
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When you combine that with her carrying the trauma of being imprisoned and tortured fr who knows how long along with her mind being slowly corrupted by the tantabus that Nightmare Moon implanted while she was unconscious, I think you get the idea.
aspetterò con pasienza del prossimo capitolo l’uscita
This was a awesome story, I hope you have a sequel planned.
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Yes I do.
mi ha un pò deluso il finale
Who stole hope? I will murder whoever did this.
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Take a guess.
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nightmare moon
10605228
Nope. I won't spoil anything until I start working on the sequel.
brb I'm finna read this real quick.
Why isn't there a tragedy tag?
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Honestly? Oversight on my part. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it now.
Finally managed to read the final chapter there.
Since it seems like the original Spike got spat out of the portal, was he in some void and conscious there? Given how he's part of the original timeline but displaced due to confusion stuff?
Wonder how he felt with what happened to Twilight there but he wasn't there for her due to being lost in some void or something due to time-travel thing?
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Still though..
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Kinda for him no perceptible time would have passed.
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So he was basically erased and "dead" till Twilight and Starlight came back?
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When Twilight got blasted through the wall in the time tunnel, it created for the tiniest measurable increment, a paradox, which the universe then over-corrected, making the spell partially rebound. Spike got suspended in the normal time flow, while Starlight and Twilight were sent into the over-corrected timeline, the latter showing up a few weeks before the former and getting captured. Just remember timey-wimey wibbly-wobbly.
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Really prefer he was still conscious and moving or so.
Like a "meanwhile what he was doing" kind of thing. Like what thoughts he be having since he's stuck in there and not there for Twilight like that(especially with what happened).
Just wished Twilight actually reacted that her number-one assistant was gone like that. Not like off-screen though.
Given there's no reaction at all, its like Spike was just gotten rid of like nothing there.
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Considering that this was a Starlight-centric story, I'll leave it up to the reader as to what Twilight was thinking in the long hours between torture sessions. Remember that Starlight was in that timeline for a couple of days before being brought face-to-face with Twilight. Also we see the external factors of being tortured, implanted with a tantabus and cursed did to Twilight, but we don't see the internal machinations of her mind.
If there's enough readers calling for it, I'll do a side story of Twilight between the time she crash-landed in that timeline and when she was reunited with Starlight.
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Still I feel like Spike really got shafted here.
Also, maybe asking the question might see if other readers are interested about that or something.
wait, frog?
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???
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the torture instrument was stuck into twilight's "frog"
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Could you show me which sentences that I need to edit? I think I'm overlooking them.
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Chapter 2
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From what I've seen, I needed to expand the description on a sentence. If I'm completely missing something, could you mark it with an underline please?
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No, I'm just wondering what do you mean by "Twilight's Frog"
like, i don't think hurting a pet of Twilight's is exactly torture
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The frog is the soft meaty part of an equine's hoof.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Frog_(horse_anatomy)#:~:text=The%20frog%20is%20a%20part,the%20bottom%20of%20the%20hoof.
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Aaaaaaaah, thanks.
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I'm not sure, but as English is not my native language I've explored a lot the translation proposals of DeepL and I came to the conclusion that "frog" would designate for horses hooves a kind of equivalent of the part between the finger and the nail in humans. Inserting eyelids is a classic torture for humans, extremely painful, and with little physical damage.
Wait, when did they rape her? And can’t they just aborted it or turned it into a material for a powerful magic or something? Maybe She can used it lifespan to extend starlight’s
Nightmare Moon: Purple edition
That’s funny
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It happened while they were still imprisoned, while Twilight was trying to dig out, the guards came and drug Starlight away. Then later when they tossed her back in the cell, she was crying and said that when the guards were doing it, she didn't cry or scream or do anything to give them the satisfaction while they violated her.
Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon make their guards loyal to them by taking the foals from their mothers shortly after birth and begin brainwashing them until they believe that the 2 of them are benevolent rulers.