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Bronyxy


Pony fan inspired by great writers such as Pen Stroke and Conner Cogwork

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Applejack finds out there may be another branch of her family in Whinnieapolis on the other side of Equestria, so she sets off on the longest journey of her life to find out.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 2 )

Hmm...a curious little story. With a somewhat abrupt ending made odder by the two chapters before it basically being a seperate mini-fic.

Really, if the site allowed it, I'd swap that Mystery tag for Adventure, because the early chapters, at least, are good demonstrations that Slice of Life and Adventure do have a border.

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Thank you for your comments - I hadn't considered this to be an adventure as there is no swashbuckling and no dragons to be slain, but I guess you're right; AJ finds herself well out of her comfort zone and so to her, this has been a big adventure. I am adding an "adventure" tag as suggested.
I have also put a header onto chapters 8 and 10 just to highlight when they occur and reduce the disruption to the flow.
Great comments - appreciate your input and thanks for stopping by.

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