A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)
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Foal Protective Services decides Derpy's clumsiness is too dangerous, and tries to take her daughter away. How many crimes and explosions will it take to keep a family together?
Will Dinky Doo Hooves get a rap sheet of her own? If she gets caught, will she have the cutest little mug shot ever?
October 2020: Now there's a sequel! "The Derpy Protocol: Twilight in the Shadows" tells what happens ten years after this story.
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Never expected something as that, but great job, gave me a laugh.
The latter also for a personal reason
This was fun. I liked how it jumped into the middle of the action, although I think Fluttershy and Dash's voicing could have used some more refinement.
Either way, upvote.
Nice story!
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Editing notice: after I read your comment, I revised the style of Fluttershy and Dash's dialog a bit, although probably not enough.
Any chance we could get more stories from this AU of yours? So many possibilities. This version of Twilight reminds me of "The Equalizer" (TV version).
Do you have an image of what Derpy and Dinky looks like ?
Cps sucks
But hey don’t fuck with derpy
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Turns out, the answer is yes!
"The Derpy Protocol: Twilight in the Shadows" tells what happens ten years later.