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Button Mash's regular routine to meet with Sweetie Belle at Princess Twilight's Castle has been thwarted thanks to a newly-stationed guard at the castle's entrance.

Now Button will have to use everything he's learned from video games to get to Sweetie Belle (and hope that she's not in another castle).

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Huh, okay then...upvote for the video game references, Button Mash being Button Mash, and the spaghetti trap from PieMations.

aa few missing words here and there but all and all very very cute! And it has two of my favorite ships. SweetieMash, and FlashLight :twilightsmile:

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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Apologies for the missing words. I must have missed them in my last two editing sessions. If it's not to much teouble, would you mind messaging me sone examples where words are missing?

Oh, this is going in the favourites

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He had seen everything from changelings invading Canterlo to the last minute salvation of the Crystal Empire thanks to a baby dragon.

“And thank you for saving, Mr. Guardspony!”

- I think you meant to have him sau “And thank you for saving me, Mr. Guardspony!”

But I don’t need guard stands between everyone and the castle.

- I am assuming you meant to say But I don’t need a guard that stands between everyone and the castle.

That was pretty cute, well done.

Quite an amusing fic.

It's nice Flash was a nice guy. Button can be a bit of a handful sometimes. But Button means well. It's nice Flash also talked with Derpy in a friendly even engaging in small talk too. What a nice guy!

I guess Button needs to learn not to judge a book by its cover. Not all guards are evil. Maybe he should use diplomacy in Styrim not just brute force to get his way.

Although Flash and Twilight was a little rushed. Maybe it would've better if it were just Twilight gave him a more subtle hint of her affection torwards him. And I would've liked to have seen more of Sweeties reaction to Buttons pro gamer moves.

But overall it was a nice funny story about Flash being a nice guard and brother. And Button attempting to be a button masher at the game of life.

This was a funny and cute story. Always nice to see Flash portrayed as a likable nice guy, especially the little affection between him and Twilight at the end. Button’s antics throughout the chapter were hilarious though, especially since it all could have been avoided for him if he just asked from the start.

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But who was stealing the pastries?

I loved this. By the way, you packed in quite a few references in this story. That was fun. I didn't think I'd ever find another story with both Flash and Button in the tags or that it'd be this good.

“DAIKALIF! cursed Button.
“Language!” a cheery voice next to Button chirped.

That was humgonian, right?

“Hey Button. What’s got you down?” Pinkie asked, “Let me guess - somepony stole your sweet roll?”

I see Pinkie is a guard, too.

Not sure of how to proceed, the two did the only thing they could think of in a situation like this: scream.

Sounds like an solid idea.


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

Small suggestion:
Consider adding horizontal lines between different scenes. Makes it a bit easier to read in my opinion.

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Noted. I've added the horizontal lines and made some other changes to formatting. Thanks for the heads up! I'll be sure to keep that in mind in the future.

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Looks better now!
Makes it easier to follow the flow of the story.

“DAIKALIF! cursed Button.

Hey

You're too young to say those words Button mash

“That’s right! Now there’s been a string of pastry thefts across Ponyville and it might be high time to dust off my old detective kit that I used the last time I solved a pastry case. Well, Twilight solved it, but I like to think that I laid the groundwork for her to solve it”

Whatever you say pinkie lol :pinkiehappy:

“Dah dah da DAAAAAH!” proclaimed Pinkie, “Looks like you found a pair of suction-cup shoes. Be sure to return them to Pinkie Pie after you’re done with them,” and handed Button the aforementioned hoof attire.

Nice Legend of Zelda reference

aww this was a cute story and I did like how button try to get in the castle just to see sweetie Belle thats nice but flash Was guarding and hes pretty tough But I do like to see his sweet side And yeah I ship flash and twilight as well lol But anyway I did like the story you did awesome in it

Now I wanna know what happens with the pastry theif. Hopefully Pinkie Pie does well on that case. Couldnt imagine if my bear claws got taken away.

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