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Aurora Sparks


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Flurry Heart is four and desperate to find out her special talent. She tries singing. Maybe not a good idea.
Enjoy this little short of Flurry nearly making her parents deaf with her 'incredible' singing.


Credit to Selfishbrat for editing.

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RCV screech singing

or death metal flurryheart

Cool. I like it

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You are very welcome.

That was a pretty good reading! However though, perhaps you could make the story a bit longer but I did chuckle at this when Flurry was singing. Good job!

My ears heart just from the description of the singing voice of our future overlord.

LMAO. Imagine if Flurry Heart teamed up the CMC when singing.
Starting with this:

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I would feel bad for the babysitter..

Makes sense, Twilight's bad at dancing just as Flurry is bad at singing.

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Kind off also implies sjnging is her Talent then. Sweetie Belle got so much better her mark has a music note. Of course amazing so tiny talent never springs out of no where, ever those little kids who win TV talent shows ten to be at least 8.

Her parents covered their ears in pain, with a look of suffering upon their face.

Earrape when I see it! XD

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:rainbowlaugh:
Poor them...and their ears

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Wha - I - wha - how -wh -wha -:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Pttttttt
Nicely done Aurora. :pinkiehappy:

:rainbowlaugh: sooooo cute, I’ve had this one on my “to read later” shelf and I’m glad I finally got to it. Haha she can’t sing but she’s absolutely adorable! I think I need more Flurry-as-a-four-year-old fics, my heart is melting.:pinkiehappy:

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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! I'm hoping to write more in the future:pinkiehappy:

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So you’re saying Flurry would be an excellent dancer? :pinkiehappy:

Heh, this reminds me of that one time when a young relative of mine dragged me to his room to show me his drumming skills :rainbowlaugh:

A pretty funny short read, though the pacing was a bit too fast, especially in the first half. Also noticed quite a bunch of grammar errors and typos, as well as some recurring issues in punctuation and dialogue tags. (Can explain more, if you wish.) Still, I think you and Sunny did a pretty good job, I’m used to seeing far more errors than this—though of course, that’s no excuse for not caring about story quality :raritywink:

This is very funny it made me of a reminder of Sweetie Belle.

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